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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-07-10 10:16 PM


Diamondhead

Looking into her eyes
I give her that look.
The look that says I never
can see enough of her.

It was caring that softened
my heart for her and
love that opened my
eyes to her beauty.

Now I want to be with
her whenever I can,
and I will if she feels
the same love for me.

That is my hope, my prayers
and perhaps my destiny.

JamesLee
July05
2004
"My look, that says I never
can see enough of you."
From the movie "Diamond Head"
starring Charlton Heston.
Written on Guam

© Copyright 2004 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-07-10 10:27 PM


I like that look, and may destiny bless you.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-07-11 04:16 AM


you've sparked my interest...gotta go see the movie soon
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2004-07-11 06:25 PM


JamesMichael~

WONDERFUL~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-07-11 07:33 PM


Excellent write James...much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

marcel
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az, usa
5 posted 2004-07-11 10:01 PM


Dang, I have definitely felt this way with loves of my life...and though sometimes nothing ever came of it, it was still a wonderful feeling to have...loved this piece, thanks.
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
6 posted 2004-07-11 11:54 PM


JamesLee, haven't read you in awhile -- good to see you again.  This was very romantic and I can tell the influence she has upon you by the way you've been writing!  Enjoyed........jo
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

7 posted 2004-07-12 09:40 AM


welcome back...missed reading you
and it seems as if there has been a substantial change...a good one at that
Love, hugs and best wishes to you both.

Lee J.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2004-07-12 08:25 PM


Thank you Susan, passing shadows, Marge, Enchantress, marcel, iliana and Lee J for the nice responses...
This is what I wrote after watching this old movie while I was on Guam...just got back to Hawaii last night...James

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