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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2004-07-10 03:25 PM

gliding gently upon serene waters
deep in a hidden mountain lake
she cries a solo tune

only the echo replies
off the canyon walls,
for he is gone forever

precious waters of the ancients
circle ‘round her in understanding
compassion cannot always comfort

lift your eyes to the skies,
for his spirit dwells therein,
not within a human skin

*
thanks to Ecuadorian flute music
Atahualpa, “Flute spirits”
for the inspiration http://ayahuma.tripod.com

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-07-10 04:00 PM

for the beauty held in this poem. Thank you for the ayahuma link, Kacy....the flute touched me.......jo

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-07-10 06:09 PM

Lovely. And I have several cd's of S.A. flute music, one of my favorites if from the people of the Andes.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

3 posted 2004-07-10 06:59 PM

Nice imagery! Thank you.

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

4 posted 2004-07-10 09:56 PM

beauttifully written and expressed!

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

5 posted 2004-07-10 11:37 PM

I always enjoy the imageries I cannot find words for. Well done! KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

6 posted 2004-07-11 03:45 AM

compassion cannot always comfort
lift your eyes to the skies,

i like how this aches and consoles at the same time. reflects the multi-faceted emotional state of us ambivalent homo sapiens well

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-07-11 04:23 AM

beautiful

thanks for sharing

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2004-07-11 11:51 AM

Kacy, this is so beautiful I could almost hear the music.
I love music. It can be so soothing and peaceful.

Hugs,
Ethel

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