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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-07-10 02:03 PM



Perhaps the hand is an
edge to different
worlds.

As if our dreams await for
our caress alone.

And all we have to do...

Is reach.

© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-07-10 02:10 PM


I've always believed
in the power of touch...

well done, Sir...

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-07-10 02:14 PM


Ericc
Enjoyed the read.

iliana
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3 posted 2004-07-10 02:25 PM


Eric, I think you are onto something here....enjoyed!.... ....jo
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4 posted 2004-07-10 03:08 PM


yeah
ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2004-07-10 03:25 PM


Exactly!!!
Bravo!
TD

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2004-07-10 03:32 PM


Eric~
This will *sigh* with me all day long~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Gaia
7 posted 2004-07-10 03:43 PM



touching the screen, to absorb these words of  magic  

Magnus
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8 posted 2004-07-10 03:58 PM


You have a way of saying so much within
the brevity of your poetry...and with such
power that ensures the reader does not soon
forget what was conveyed.

cinnamongirl
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9 posted 2004-07-10 05:12 PM


And with your divine words, you have reached my soul.

Thank you for the spiritual, poetic caress.

I love you,

Moca

Susan
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10 posted 2004-07-10 06:04 PM


Sigh, breathe, read again.  Sigh . . .

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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just out of reach
11 posted 2004-07-10 10:12 PM


yes....what Susan said. hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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12 posted 2004-07-11 11:38 AM


Oh yeah, Eric.....
"to reach" will work!!
hugs,
Ethel

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