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swatcatpettus
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since 2004-04-12
Posts 57
CA

0 posted 2004-07-10 03:28 AM



take your shields and pride
raise your fists and resist

        LET
        THE
        RIOT
       BEGIN!

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Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-07-10 06:22 PM


Set your heart aflame
burning with righteous fire
but withhold the anger
discard the ire
and peacefully begin
the change

  Susan

let our footsetps follow in such revolutionaries as Ghandi and the Dalai Lama with our own riot of love

blackandwhitehorizon
Member
since 2003-05-05
Posts 183
an akward state of mind
2 posted 2004-08-10 10:54 AM


ahh rebeling teen angst. cute. i see where you're coming from. but i think susan pretty much summed it up for me.
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2004-08-10 11:31 AM


The pen can be mightier than the sword ~ and can be a lethal weapon! Your poem certainly made me sit up and take notice! lol

I would like to echo Susan's reply. She stated my own thoughts better than I could!

Peace, Love, & Harmony,
EA
Dove 1

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