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Fagin
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Rain
Arrangement and Score
By Kelly Atwell and Robert Rilling


Iíve spent endless years.. searchiní for dreams of my soul..
and in all that time, Iíve let a lot of cherished things go..

And many slip from the caverns of my mind..
But when I think of the ones of you, it makes me cry..

So I cry in the rain, see it wash away my pain..

I was told I am the product of the life Iíve led..
though youíre the only vision Iím seeiní my head..
And youíre every shining star, smiliní down on me tonight,
and the choices that Iíve made, have let me down inside..

So I cry in the rain, see it wash away my pain..
See it wash it away..

Youíre every shining star, smiliní down on me tonight,
to know that you are happy, itís no surprise,
to see that all this time was not in vain..
Though I cry in the rain, see it wash away my pain..
© Copyright 2004 Robert Rilling - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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I'd sure like to hear the music behind these words -- I take it these are lyrics -- if they're not, they sure are lyrical.  
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I was told I am the product of the life Iíve led..
though youíre the only vision Iím seeiní my head..
And youíre every shining star, smiliní down on me tonight,
and the choices that Iíve made, have let me down inside..

~*~

Send me the music, bro...
Seymour Tabin
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Fagin,
Enjoyed the read.

kayjay
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4 posted 07-10-2004 09:37 AM       View Profile for kayjay   Email kayjay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kayjay

I agree with those who would enjoy hearing the  music with these intriguing words.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Fagin
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Wow! Thanks all. I do have music for all these, and will make it available to all soon. Thanks so much
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Fagin~
Worded pictures set to music~
Excellent~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Enchantress
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7 posted 07-10-2004 12:25 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Wonderful!!  I too would love to hear this to music!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

ThisDiamond
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Excellent verse...can't wait to hear the musical score.
TD
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enjoyed
Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 07-22-2004 08:37 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

I for one would love to hear this.
This is fantastic writing, talent runs deep in your family!
Susan Caldwell
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"I was told I am the product of the life Iíve led..
though youíre the only vision Iím seeiní my head.."


Very touching, moving write!

Enjoyed!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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Sure hoping you're working on this one...
Martie
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Fagin

A beautifully lyrical poem of heart music!
Gentle Spirit
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I am so pleased that this came back to the top, it is rather lovely!
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I'd sure like to listen to this one
The One & Only
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16 posted 02-01-2005 01:59 PM       View Profile for The One & Only   Email The One & Only   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The One & Only

I just love that, You have been someone i always looked up to. love you,
Enchantress
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"I was told I am the product of the life Iíve led..
though youíre the only vision Iím seeiní my head..
And youíre every shining star, smiliní down on me tonight,
and the choices that Iíve made, have let me down inside.."

Heart music Robert...heart music.
Play for the angels tonight..
and rest in our Lord's loving arms.
Artic Wind
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good write

ARCTIC WIND
 
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