Martie
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2004-07-09
11:05 PM
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Unchained
I am floating air ribald comfort blood aware a song in tune of effortless my fingers graceful glee no less
All stress is floating balloons in flight and to dream it like I remember is what I’ll do tonight the flying like a dance and I a ballerina rare in curve and line I’m there already gone across the dusk that leaves me sitting here in my unchained chair relieved
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Martie Odell Ingebretsen
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Magnus
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2004-07-09
11:07 PM
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Care to share the next dance, seeing as how you have just fluttered and flitted about for a little while....
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Dark Angel
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2004-07-09
11:31 PM
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Wow Martie.. just fabulous and the imagery..marvelous!
hugs m'dear friend.
Maree The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. ~Stevie Nicks~
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iliana
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USA
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2004-07-10
12:28 PM
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An uplift to my evening, Martie!
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Krawdad
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2004-07-10
01:37 AM
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to fly . . . even if not away quietly in the ease of air
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EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
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2004-07-10
05:24 AM
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I much enjoyed this! "A spring shower was cause to run Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC
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kayjay
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2004-07-10
07:52 AM
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It seems that you are envisioning things that no longer are. This is a wonderful find on an early morning. KJThrough rubble and trouble and dark of night The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light
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Seymour Tabin
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2004-07-10
07:54 AM
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Martie The write and you are a delight.
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Sunshine
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2004-07-10
08:10 AM
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All stress is floating balloons in flight and to dream it like I remember is what I’ll do tonight
~*~
You know how... but you're good enough to show the rest of us why...
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Janet Marie
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2004-07-10
09:22 AM
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I am floating air ribald comfort blood aware a song in tune of effortless my fingers graceful glee no less ==================================
oh you aint neva lied. I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding.
~Fluent~ John O'Donohue
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icebox
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2004-07-10
09:54 AM
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You put joy in my heart this morning.
Thank you.
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Ratleader
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2004-07-10
09:57 AM
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Love the way you handle this....you floating in the poem's direction, with bits and parts of you escaping to dance little fancys of their own for a moment before they return to you....beautiful stuff.~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________
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Marge Tindal
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2004-07-10
11:02 AM
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MartieSis~
Quietly admiring the word-art of you~
'All stress is floating balloons in flight and to dream it like I remember is what I’ll do tonight'
Oh ... yes~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram <))><
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garysgirl
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2004-07-11
12:09 PM
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Martie, I love the peaceful and serene feel of this. Just beautiful, sweet lady. Hugs, Ethel
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Earth Angel
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2004-07-11
01:01 PM
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"All stress is floating balloons in flight"
~ I often imagine this myself! Up and up and away my stresses go! ~ into the ethers to let the Universe deal with them! lol
May you always be unchained and unencumbered by the stresses in life!
Linda
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Goodknight
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Ohio, USA
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2004-07-17
11:01 AM
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Martie - I just never tire of reading your poetry and treveling with your words to places of wonder. You say things so very well - Paul
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miscellanea
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2004-08-05
01:50 PM
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Martie, I just had to bring this back up again. It's so pretty, filled with hope. A treat to read! miscellanea
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Corinne
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2004-08-05
05:22 PM
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It sounds as though some great burden has been lifted, Martie!
This has a wonderful sense of peace about it.
Corinne
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Duncan
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2004-08-05
07:08 PM
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"I’m there already gone across the dusk that leaves me sitting here in my unchained chair relieved"
The degree between being unchained and being free is often wider than we wish. Enjoyed much Martie...
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Local Rebel
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2004-08-05
10:32 PM
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Waiter, could you bring me some of what she's having?
Memory IS a renewable energy..
again!
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passing shadows
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2004-08-06
02:34 AM
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Honeybunch
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2004-08-07
04:29 PM
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And to think I nearly missed this. Fly high Martie - life's beautiful when we leave the stress behind.
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Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind
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2004-08-07
05:52 PM
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ahhh to feel this way....lovely Martie! I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone though you're still with me I've been alone all along..Now I'm bound by the life you left behind
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Earth Angel
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2004-08-07
06:17 PM
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Now I know why you like flowers so much! It is because you are a butterfly!
Linda
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Margherita
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2004-08-07
06:23 PM
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Ethereal and yet so real in its feel of freedom. Very beautiful. Love, Margherita
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LeeJ
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2004-08-09
07:28 AM
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this was tremendous Martie
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hoot_owl_rn
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2004-08-09
09:50 AM
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Ah...to be unchained
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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
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2004-08-09
09:54 AM
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and to dream it like I remember...
a wonderful line of thought
~smiling~ M
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