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Pastimes

There you lay, sated,
Under summers’ sun beams
And I realize
Between want and seems,

That summer is running
Far and away from us,
From you and me, as
Another year will slip on by

And I am only
In your mind
A shadow found
In keep of time

And there we lay
As sand comes to play
On common grounds

Upon past’s wind…

                                God keep me and summer’s trust
                                            That I will warm again one love


Or so the Sun says to the earth
Where all is treasured in loving birth…

And one’s hovering,
Hear angels’ wings
In hark of all…
And  the playing of strings…

© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 07-09-2004 10:47 PM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

Oooooohhhh, I love this.  I am right there on the same wave length tonight.  
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2 posted 07-09-2004 10:48 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

Please lend me your muse Karilea.
Yours seems to be working overtime lately!
How lovely is this then?!!!
Another keeper for sure. hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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Beauty Sis
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That summer is running
Far and away from us,
From you and me, as
Another year will slip on by

So well said!

This surely trumpeted awareness to me.  Where are these days going? KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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When the sun speaks... we all feel the warm of summer.

I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding.

~Fluent~
John O'Donohue

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"And there we lay
As sand comes to play
On common grounds

Upon past’s wind…

                                God keep me and summer’s trust
                                            That I will warm again one love"

I too feel the summer rushing by....
There is a sweet ache here.
Love this dear Karilea...
Hugs~


~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~
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7 posted 07-10-2004 01:54 PM       View Profile for Ericc   Email Ericc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ericc

Simply beautiful!

Eric
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8 posted 07-10-2004 10:02 PM       View Profile for marcel   Email marcel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for marcel

What a wonderful penning! Such description of dreamlike visions definitely puts a smile on my face, thank you.
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how'd I miss this?
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amazing write karilea....

~Alli~

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dear karilea,

just writing this letter to inform you that i have read your poem and i am quite elated to inform that i found it to be of your usual top notch caliber, worthy of the highest and most sincere praises.. this poem emanates your very name and that makes it ever so more beautiful
 
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