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BabieDoll
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since 2003-02-13
Posts 268
BFE

0 posted 2004-07-09 08:55 PM


When you find that one person
who can make you smile with a glance,
who can make you cry with a kiss,
who can make your heart skip,
consider yourself lucky.
Love should be cherished,
and although it is never perfect,
some may never experience this gift.
You must grasp it while you can.
Hold on to it and treasure it.
If it all falls into place,
thank the heavens, for you are blessed.
If love fails, don’t lose hope;
lost love is a part of life and the pain
of heartache does not last forever.
I promise you this.
Love is beautiful and baffling;
two people who love each other
so immensely
that no words could fully describe it.
It is confusing at times
but is never a lost cause.
There should be no regrets when it
comes to love.
Take in the feelings, bad or good,
And go where it leads you.*

There is not ONE person in this world that you cannot live without.

© Copyright 2004 J.Lynn - All Rights Reserved
Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-07-09 10:20 PM


Wise words.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2004-07-17 12:19 PM


Enjoyed your thoughts on love...James
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2004-07-17 09:38 PM


For one who appears (by your photo) to be so young, you sure are wise.  Lovely poem!
devinechild22
Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571

4 posted 2004-07-17 09:42 PM


That was so beautiful. You guys need to stop making me cry. LOL. Seriously, I touching piece.

                  *Allison*

~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~

CMGrimm
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685
USA
5 posted 2004-07-21 11:29 PM


Very pretty piece.   I enjoyed it.


Chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions.  - ANON.



miscellanea
Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
6 posted 2004-07-21 11:52 PM


Your writing is very sweet and shows a lot of wisdom.  I like it!

              misc'e

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