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Something Real... |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Life isn't meant For the weak of mind Love isn't meant For the weak of spirit... I didn't know how much of a contradiction my strength has been up Until... He caused me to take more than a step back When he walked into my life Caused my heart to have a panic attack... I don't believe in judging one's past when it comes to a deeper soul connection But I didn't know how much of a contradiction my thoughts were on the subject up Until... He caused me to open my eyes to the risks of trusting someone Now I feel more disconnected Sickened by something real Something I thought I always wanted I didn't know how much of a contradiction my needs were up Until... He injected me with his heroin laced love If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Your style is quite unique in thought and presentation. Enjoyed the resonance of spirit. The blending of mind, heart and soul in love is a climax to be attained...and when it comes, there is no fear left unconsumed. TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ceinwyn, I really liked your anaology here and I do know these feelings -- those charmic ties are there to teach us, I think -- what? I'm still learning.......jo |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Thanks Jo and Diamond...I really appreciate your replies...and yeah I'm still learning too..wondering where to go next...*Hugs* If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Interesting slant on the love-angle in this one. I enjoyed it. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I could sense the confusion and frustration in your words. The words seemed to pour out from your solar plexus and down onto the page. A great conclusion! It had real impact! ~ Does not sound as though you are in the greatest of places emotionally at this time. You deserve so much better, Dear Kristen! ~ and may that come your way soon! Loving hugs, Linda |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
He injected me with his heroin laced love This is a strong image. Yep, that love stuff can be pretty strong! misc'e |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
A very intense write but awesome all the way!  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know that drug too well but that was long ago |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Intresting........ I liked it alot. (: Juju |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Love is not always so grand and sometimes so bitter to the taste when it slips away. Leaving us going in circles, wondering which way to go now...for each step is down a path, often unknown... Hang in there my friend... |
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