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Amature2
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0 posted 2004-07-09 01:11 PM



Un-Healed

The pain may subside
But the deep wound on a heart
Continues to bleed




"Everybody's lost
But they're pretending they're not
Lost"........Morrissey

© Copyright 2004 Amature2 - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-07-09 01:48 PM


yes, it does and it will, until forgiveness cores right through to the disease.  And I mean, pain...are wounds that need special dressings in order to heal.  

Thank you for sharing.

DawnG
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2 posted 2004-07-26 02:01 PM


I know this feeling all too well. But hopefully someday that would will scab over and just break open from time to time, when the wound and soul needs a good cleansing and don't be ashamed if you need to thoroughly cleanse it with a good cry.

                     Dawn

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3 posted 2004-07-26 03:30 PM


Amature2~
I'm here to tell you ... it eventually heals~

Wonderful Senryu format for this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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just out of reach
4 posted 2004-07-26 04:01 PM


Awesome. hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

Susan
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5 posted 2004-07-26 07:31 PM


Yes indeed.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Startime55
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6 posted 2004-07-26 07:37 PM


Time can heal much and new love can heal completely...painful memories may stay but can be replaced with the joys of true love...My heart goes out to you in your time of pain...**hugs**

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7 posted 2004-07-27 03:50 AM


understood
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