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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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0 posted 2004-07-09 08:32 AM


we had a hallway there
in our thoughts
with all of the doors
equal on each side

you wanted to open your own
or at least go through first
you did appreciate me though
being a gentleman

I watched you at the window
as you looked down
your eyes were kids at christmas
I watched your mouth say wow

you asked me to come see
and you described what was there
you asked if I had ever seen it before
and pouted when I said I had

so I took you to my side
and opened the doors
you smiled happy then
when you saw the reflections

and realized we were but mirrors


_____________

Dark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-09-2004 09:04 AM).]

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2004-07-09 08:34 AM


I love when that happens.



you are sssssssssssssssoooooooooooooo good.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-07-09 08:36 AM


smiling a great big grin...this ironically reminds me of someone very special. unbeknown to you, thank you for those memories.
A Beautiful write, as always
Thank you for this lovely song....Good moring sir...wishing you a great day and weekend as well.


Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-07-09 08:36 AM



The imagery
is magnificent...
keep those mirrors polished...

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2004-07-09 08:45 AM


wonderful images Dark, loved this morning morsel you leave us...

Kahlil
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5 posted 2004-07-09 09:09 AM


..tasty morning reflections, Dark One...

~K~

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2004-07-09 09:45 AM


Dark Stranger
Good thoughts, good write, good read.

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
7 posted 2004-07-09 11:30 AM


I liked this very much.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Martie
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8 posted 2004-07-09 11:40 AM


DS

"your eyes were kids at christmas"

What a lovely image, that.  Hugs to you, my friend!  As always your writing is, wow!


miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
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9 posted 2004-10-19 10:44 AM


Incredible creativity!  Um... Wish I would have been tuned into your writing sooner.
        miscellanea

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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10 posted 2004-10-19 10:41 PM


its nice when someone wears your own face too
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