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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-07-09 07:17 AM


The Wake of Sleep

I sandman to oasis dream
As often as I can it seem
I cannot stay awakes true realm
Before the yawn of overwhelm

My head falls down upon my chest
My eyes will close a moments rest
And I am off upon a sail
To touch the inner mind of Braille

It’s there I plow the earth of seem
And plant the bean stork of a dream
And climb it to a rainbow sky
And drink the ecstasy of sigh

It is to me a pains release
An oasis of pure surcease
A kind illusion of succumb
Desires thumb that plucked a plum

So if you see me there in chair
Just leave a note that you were there.



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1 posted 2004-07-09 07:28 AM


Hi Sy!

Wish I had your gift.

Both for the poetry and the sleeping.

Thanks for the sweetness, "Beautiful Dreamer".

Now gimme dat hug.

and a kiss for the road--

sigh.

NOW maybe I can sleep.

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2 posted 2004-07-09 07:38 AM


So if you see me there in chair
Just leave a note that you were there.

==========================

OH NO...if I am there...youre getting woke up. LOL  

someones gotta drive me and Issy and Randy to the beach.   *L*


Before the yawn of overwhelm


youre just so kewl...
and I'm youre poetic fool. *winkiewinkie*




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3 posted 2004-07-09 07:50 AM


Been there..done that.  Nothing like a cat nap to restore the energy level Sy.  Well done.

believe in what your heart feels...

LeeJ
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4 posted 2004-07-09 08:40 AM


Hey Sy, good morning, how are ya?

Most of the time, even though my eyes are open, I've had my shower, 2 cups of coffee, I'm still unfortunately in a coma...but I know the jest of your lesson here today...many thanks...smiles and hugs.

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5 posted 2004-07-09 08:49 AM


you are the master of rhyme divine...
I think I will just tiptoe through and not wake you, seems your naps inspire you!

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6 posted 2004-07-09 09:50 AM


For those who nap a moment's rest
angels sigh with them in dream;
and I will leave a note, my best,
mixed with kisses, and one sun's beam...


Susan
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7 posted 2004-07-09 11:46 AM


You make me think of my Mother.  She raised eight kids -whew, and was a master at the cat nap.  She would always awake refreshed and ready to continue on.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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8 posted 2004-07-09 11:47 AM


Sy

I was here and left you this note and also something on your cheek!  

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9 posted 2004-07-09 12:57 PM


Hath ye not seen the love letters there,
Beneath thy corner snoring chair?
I made many an effort to stir thy brain,
Yet on ye slumbered ~ t'was all in vain.

A night of flight to Evermore.
Ye passed to sit and sleep and snore.
Perhaps I shall give ye one more chance
To be a knight with mighty lance.

That ye might smite the evil dragon
Who carries off each helpless maidon
He tempts them with flowers and candy,
The dragon's known as "Dangerous Randy".
ChairDragonPrincess

Rise Sir Knight!
Knight
EA

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2004-07-09 02:09 PM


serenity,
You got one big hug from Randy and I.

JM,
Winkiewinkie from your Randy Stinky.
My mothy Tinkerbell.


scorpio
Thank you for the well done my friend.

LeeJ
Smiles and hugs back sweety.

Gentle Spirit
They do, they do. Hugs

Sunshine,
Not wearing sun lotion today so I'll take the sun beam. Hugs

Susan,
That's the way to do it. Thank you

Martie,
LOve you too. Hugs

Earth Angel,
At the moment my dangerous Randy is staying at JM's And I don't think she's letting him out lately. LOL Beautiful write thank you.
Big Hug

iliana
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11 posted 2004-07-09 11:34 PM


I know what you mean.......sweet dreaming, Seymour.   .....jo
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12 posted 2004-07-10 09:43 PM


Sleep is nice......


Loved your rymes like always.

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2004-07-10 09:58 PM


iliana
Thank you sweet.

Juju
Yes it is thank you.

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14 posted 2004-07-11 04:30 AM


love that ending!
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15 posted 2004-07-11 04:49 AM


I am laughing myself silly here Sy.  I just pictured you dozing off, and Isbel shaking you to wake up.  A catnap does a soul good, so sneak them
Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2004-07-11 07:13 AM


passing,
Me too.

Sharon,
She used to wake me up, but lately has let me sleep and I'd wake up 2:00AM in the morning and first have to go to sleep. LOL


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17 posted 2004-07-11 11:41 AM


I love these kinds of naps. Don't you?
And those dreams are nice, too.
Hugs,  
Ethel

Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2004-07-11 12:21 PM


Ethel,
You bet, thank you sweet.

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