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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-07-08 09:31 AM



My lips are parched
beneath their softened skin
their need of touch
an almost forgotten pasttime.

My eyes fill a void
and gamble with words
afraid to cry out
in daily need.

No one here in arms to fall
and no one's touch to gently call
upon the passion that is steeped
in secret hold beyond words keep.

I fail with words reduced for now
lingering over others
not even able to count sheep
nor recall the last time
a face faced mine
and eyes left mine in good bye
reflecting the almost.

Just another day, one more sunrise
to sunset through eyes
searching for more.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2004 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
1 posted 2004-07-08 09:39 AM


nicely written

Victims....aren't we all?

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2004-07-08 11:33 AM


"Just another day, one more sunrise
to sunset through eyes
searching for more."

There is so much feel and real to your writes.

~ May you find what you are searching for. The time is coming...

Loving hug,
EA



Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-07-08 11:36 AM


The ache of longing is palpable in this.  

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2004-07-08 12:54 PM


you should know I understand this well

hugs

vandana
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since 1999-10-22
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USA
5 posted 2004-07-08 12:56 PM


enjoyed
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