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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-07-08 09:26 AM


As the Pendulum swings...
Life slowly ticks away,
Old friendships fade and sway.
As the Pendulum swings...
Life brings something new,
While for some there's nothing to do.
As the Pendulum swings...
Days go by without notice,
And all you hear is the distant churp of a lotus.
As the Pendulum swings...
Minds grow numb,
People's heads get dumb.
As the Pendulum swings...
Think of the good thing it brings,
And remember all those little things.
As the Pendulum swings...
Slowly ticking life away,
Everything seems to fade and sway.

Victims....aren't we all?

© Copyright 2004 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri
1 posted 2004-07-08 11:54 AM


Getting pretty deep here boyo...I like it
Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08
Posts 956

2 posted 2004-07-08 11:59 AM


I like it too.  As the pendulum swings, new things spring forth, along with all the things that fade. Thanks for the poem this morning - its incredibly relevant for me today.


Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-07-08 12:05 PM


I can feel the passing of time and the need to make every moment mean something rather than allowing it to pass with our (I can't find the word and that's so frustrating)-- what I mean is we slip into letting time direct us rather than our choosing what we do with our time.  We feel beaten by the swing rather than the opportunity to increase with its passing.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2004-07-08 01:00 PM


everything including reason
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