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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-07-08 08:17 AM



playin cards made of string
and the one handed man
he was the shuffle
I was the shill

we didn't play for money
but played for lines
on the highway
winner got the women

in short dresses
and passenger seats
with bordom in their eyes
and an ache inside

that made finger nail noises
on their windows
when they passed by
and looked up at truckers

takin anatomy at kenworth acadamy


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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2004-07-08 09:26 AM


You sounding like the one-eyed Jack here....


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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2004-07-08 02:11 PM


sounds like a ride enjoyed
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2004-07-08 07:00 PM


Sometimes
some
poetry
leaves
me
...




wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
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4 posted 2004-07-08 07:01 PM


pretty smooth

i like the ambiguity

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