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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2004-07-07 10:59 PM




To drown in such
beauty...

I would swim forever,
inside the ocean on
your fingertip,

Drowning...only to be rescued,
by your love.


"The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched.They must be felt with the heart."~Helen Keller (1880-1968)


© Copyright 2004 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
exhale
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1 posted 2004-07-07 11:21 PM


Drowning...only to be rescued,
by your love.

what a lovely poem,words that so many hearts around the world can relate to so well.
thank you for the comment btw lol,and i ahve seen runaway bride,and it hasnt come to my attention i was similiar! haha and its one of my favorite movies,how weird! lol sorry i had to comment,i'm a movie geek 3rd,a music nerd 2nd,but a poetry freak all the way,this poem was beautiful

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-07-08 04:14 AM



A Romantic Heart
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3 posted 2004-07-08 04:21 AM


Thanks Exhale WOW! I didn't know it was your favorite....the reason I suggested the movie..I was the same way and noticed I related to Julia Roberts character....I cound not tell how I liked my eggs...I always liked what everyone else liked...because I am a people pleaser and easy going....I lost my identity...but I now have it back!

Love and Hugs
~ARH

"The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched.They must be felt with the heart."~Helen Keller (1880-1968)


A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 2004-07-08 04:22 AM


Thanks Dixie....you jumping bean! LOL!

~Love and Hugs ~
~ARH

"The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched.They must be felt with the heart."~Helen Keller (1880-1968)


exhale
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5 posted 2004-07-08 10:34 PM


it's great to have someone i can relate with lol,its been a while. but i know what you mean,while being like the biggest people pleaser i seem to have lost who i am,but i'm trying my damn hardest to find it
Goldenrose
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6 posted 2004-07-10 08:03 AM


A very fine poem...thank you..

Goldenrose.

Look for love and happiness...

Ericc
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7 posted 2004-07-10 01:59 PM


To be part of this inspiration is an honor and a rare privilege.

It is beautiful!

Eric

iliana
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8 posted 2004-07-10 06:21 PM



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