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Krawdad
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0 posted 2004-07-07 10:49 AM



                   On skies of blue
  

                   All the flat bottomed boats,
                   countless and orderly,
                   glide in ranks and rows
                   with puffed white sails
                   aglow in an afternoon's sun

                   Moored below,
                   I search expectantly
                   up through deepest air
                   in search of her dangling feet,
                   laughing
  


                   e

                   Congatulations, Deputy Helen !

                    (how does cloud nine feel?)


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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2004-07-07 10:50 AM


love this as I am sure Deputy Helen will too.
Congrats Helen!  Thank you Krawdad.

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2004-07-07 12:12 PM


Krawdad~
This is brilliant~
Helen will LOVE IT too~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-07-07 12:33 PM


awesome! a fine write!

I am so proud of her...so proud!

Sunshine
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4 posted 2004-07-07 03:31 PM


What a wonderful present
to honor her graduation!
Well done, Sir

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
5 posted 2004-07-07 11:21 PM


what can i say but this....

Sigh


when you touch me
it is in a place so deep
and all the sounds heard
are a sigh

Martie
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6 posted 2004-07-07 11:25 PM


Krawdad

This is wonderful and made me smile, I'm sure it will her, too!

rwood
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7 posted 2004-07-08 09:12 AM


Hey Poet! What a lovely verse for a lovely deputy. Your imagery is dreamy and uplifting. So good to read you again.

Sincerely,
Reg

Susan
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walking the surreal
8 posted 2004-07-08 11:52 AM


I love the concept of this.  

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

VAS
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9 posted 2004-07-08 04:05 PM


lovely images! a FINE feel to this

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Duncan
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10 posted 2004-07-08 08:46 PM


Love the cloud pictures, Krawdad.  Wish I'd thought of it.

And Helen...Congratulations Deputy Slick!!!
Damn, that has a ring to it...  

iliana
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11 posted 2004-07-09 01:38 AM


Krawdad -- a very lovely gift for our Helen!  
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