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monkey's wedding ... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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chirpy cuddlers bounce tweeting from their sheltered nests beseeching the shaken air and nervously prodding the shadow’s root slowly, the clouds yield and shift spreading their sprawling wings and in their movement shed droplets of tears taking hint, the sun streaks through to illuminate shiny dribbles ~ it is all-purifying when the seven-coloured spirit makes her appearance dressed in garbs of a rainbow as she stretches her arms to embrace the crying it is the scene of the monkey’s wedding and everybody is invited to join the dance -------- a response to "a Serene Challenge" /pip/Forum7/HTML/000622.html Thanks, my serene friend for letting this mind explore the pristine prismatic dance of rain and sunshine... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Vivid! Very nicely designed. Love the idea of the 7 colored spirit embracing the crying to reveal then a lovely rainbow. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
By George [the Monkey] I think you've done it! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Well done, Sudhir! enjoyed!! ~tier  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sudhir, that was a fabulous write! Downright fabulous! I thoroughly enjoyed your "pristine prismatic dance of rain and sunshine...  ~ and Serenity Blaze conjures up wondrously catalytic challenges! Warm hug and a big smile, Linda |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this is like looking thru the raindrop itself.very serendipitous |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You... I hope you feel me smiling-- you truly captured the essence of the wonder I feel every time this happens. You're my new favorite poet! "it is all-purifying when the seven-coloured spirit makes her appearance dressed in garbs of a rainbow as she stretches her arms to embrace the crying" Thank you so much for this kind friend.  |
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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190 |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sudhir -- absolutely wonderful!  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you very much... very very much regards sudhir |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I hope you don't mind but I left a link for this for my sister, and she did indeed say that after reading this, she finally understood why I would issue such a "weird" challenge. You are wonderful, sudhir! Thanks again. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I don't mind at all, my serene friend... no problem at all... Regards Sudhir |
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