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choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

0 posted 2004-07-07 08:09 AM

Though you keep silent,
the moon passes by unseen
behind gathered clouds-
your voice echoes everywhere
through the wind rustled pines.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-07-07 08:23 AM

another beauty! rich with visuals

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2004-07-07 10:07 AM

So soft and lovely, I enjoyed this very much!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2004-07-07 12:21 PM

Paul~
You ink-whisper these beauties so perfectly~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

4 posted 2004-07-07 12:43 PM

sometimes that is the only thing I can hear

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

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singapore

5 posted 2004-07-07 12:55 PM

evokes emotions plenty. excellent!

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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6 posted 2004-07-07 01:42 PM

Paul, I saw "choshi" and knew I had to read immediately. This was very, very nice! ....jo

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

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7 posted 2004-07-07 10:11 PM

Though you keep silent,
the moon passes by unseen
behind gathered clouds-
your voice echoes everywhere
through the wind rustled pines.

within the silences
all the unspoken thoughts
beating of 2 far away hearts
filling the distance between

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

8 posted 2004-07-07 11:39 PM

Though you keep silent,
the moon passes by unseen
behind gathered clouds-
your voice echoes everywhere
through the wind rustled pines.
```````````````````````````````````
the rustled pining
shudders away the silence
sighs through naked limbs
in beg of warm reprise
of heated breath from your song

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

9 posted 2004-07-07 11:42 PM

choshi

Silence can be so loud....lovely poem.

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

10 posted 2004-07-08 09:04 AM

Dawn, I forget that it's winter by you which doubles up the power of your images.

Though you keep silent,
the moon passes by unseen
behind gathered clouds-
your voice echoes everywhere
through the wind rustled pines.
```````````````````````````````````
the rustled pining
shudders away the silence
sighs through naked limbs
in beg of warm reprise
of heated breath from your song

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Through naked limbs,
the brightness of the full moon
mirrors in shared gaze-
shimmers of sighs rise and fall
beneath the night's warm cover.

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

11 posted 2004-07-08 09:11 AM

Though you keep silent,
the moon passes by unseen
behind gathered clouds-
your voice echoes everywhere
through the wind rustled pines.

within the silences
all the unspoken thoughts
beating of 2 far away hearts
filling the distance between

Faraway hearts
beat together as one
in thoughts shared-
both spoken and unspoken
as ocean waves rise and fall.

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

12 posted 2004-07-08 09:14 AM

choshi

Silence can be so loud....lovely poem.

For sure, like the moment between lightning and thunder....Thank you Martie

~P

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