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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2004-07-07 07:50 AM


We studied the east coast
Call it “a marvelous philosophical whim”
With very few words, simply, climbing
Out on a limb
Modern technology destroyed itself
Right before our eyes, we laughed, held hands
and ran, right into a novel
Offering us new Island writings
At no cost, except a world famous story
Which became, our own privet Hollywood
Somewhat like The Paris Liberation in 1944
A style which expresses itself in many forms
Nothing at all like Skull & Bones

They say, once a new love comes along
And sweeps you off your feet
You forget about the old, but, as of yet
I have not met that man who knows how to use
A broom, dressing himself, with papers ready
While passing through customs
Without having to turn on the security alarm
Using interactive maps, coloring next week
And the next after that

We simply drove and stayed for a while
Where ever we ended up

But now, I am simply a black and white photo
Of a soldier…daring, like evergreen shadows
Cause when I think back, occasionally
I remember the text in the background
A collection not of public domain
Then, I forgot to take the introductory level classes
I was young, sniveling and fresh out of college

Now I’m awash in American Prohibition, while
Taking a ride on the Hindenburg, looking up
Always looking up…but surely I don’t mind
Writing a new covenant of the League of Nations
As a post modern artist, tracing oils on sandpaper
While reading about the south beach diet
Needing to shake a few pounds
Creating my own virtual sculptures
With no interrupted boundaries, simply a journalist
Drinking Nature’s finest!

Adding woodcut prints, sometimes out of my tree
But then, the entire world is my palate, I think
About how important it is to get to know your
Traveling companion, if happenstance would have it
And I’d fall overboard, I need to know, he’ll keep me afloat
Because vagueness is a complexity all in it’s own

Each day embraces a chamber of events
Simple notations winking, free verse running through me
Still thinking about our first date, the one “you” forgot
Dinner at Cab Fryes and secret codes of quivering love
Remember when you grabbed my hand in Williamsburg
Reading the labels on each finger, ones you pre-rehersed
And assumed I was fishing?  You never knew my license expired!

You offered me your handkerchief when I sneezed
But when I obliged you screamed, grimacing
I fell to one corner of the sky
“Trying to sop up the spill with recycled paper towels”
Do you remember that?
A soggy spring picnic under twilight’s chandelier?
Where I wore every woman’s face
Who poured everything into a well
And came up with an empty pale
But, at least the pale returned, that accounts for something?

Now, I heave a sigh…thinking
One day, I’ll gently hit that piñata
And all those prizes will fall out
Dancing in a whirl of lithography
Flowing seaward in a lifelong friendship
Closing the door to the darkroom
With a smile I ask myself
“Can you say….passport?”
Not a matter of choice…really
Spending summers alone, in the Caribbean
It’s where I belong…for now…
But, to be candid, I’m missing those one arm bandits
In Atlantic City, with no hard feelings,
simply exploring the splendid creations life is capable of.....

© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-07-07 07:57 AM


LeeJ
Well I do hope you hit the piñata. Good morning dear.

rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
2 posted 2004-07-08 07:54 AM


A walk down memory lane, history, and exploration. Your references draw many conclusions, but then we know how history repeats itself. You travel well poetess.

Sincerely,
Reg

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2004-07-08 09:04 AM


I would rather travel through life alone than be with a bad travelling companion.

The more I read your poetry, the more I get to know you ~ and to know you, is to like you!

~ Happy trails!

Linda

choshi
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since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184
New York
4 posted 2004-07-08 09:30 AM


Lee, You stir up so many memories, thoughts and feelings and cover so much ground with such ease and power....~P
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