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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2004-07-06 05:54 PM


I can feel it coming
A storm ready to erupt
In my heart

A storm of emtions
Of feelings
That I wish I understood

I feel love
And yet anger
All at the same time

A storm is brewing
In my heart
I wish I could control it

A storm of unknown
Unthought of
Consequences

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Susan
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1 posted 2004-07-06 08:07 PM


Whoa, run for cover!  No, really, good luck.  Storms aren't easy but they sure do make life interesting.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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2 posted 2004-07-06 08:10 PM


how ya ever gonna see a rainbow without a little rain?

Nicely penned emotions here!

DawnG
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3 posted 2004-07-26 01:44 PM


This is very nice. I have seen you come a long way in your writing as of late. Congratulations!

                        Dawn

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