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Occasional flame
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
The clouds built from steel blue threatening dark and low, then billowed over hay tanned field as rising smoke and promises finished in wisps, miles above. The wind below roused heavy air to breeze, stirring the heat from your occasional flame and the need to burn in you again. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is a very passionate poem. I could feel the flame. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"and the need to burn in you again." I could use a good stoking myself.  (izzit hot in here or izzit me?) sigh. see what you did? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 LOL, no, the pix isn't of me. Not today, anyway. ROTFL. What a cool/hot write Dunc. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dang.......  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
yes, it IS hot in here !!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The clouds built from steel blue threatening dark and low, then billowed over hay tanned field =========================== The wind below roused heavy air to breeze, stirring the heat from your occasional flame and the need to burn in you again. ============================ I AM GIDDY!!!!!  Duncan wrote a moth anthem!!! yayayayayayayayayayaya  ahhhhhhhhh.... nothing like moth wings to fan the flames. Me thinks I better go get the singe proof mascara ... hehe I LOVE the imagery in this.... and of course the heat. Ya know...Im sure I have pics to go with this... LOL  NO NOT THOSE KIND...  wakka wakka.......... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The clouds built from steel blue threatening dark and low, then billowed over hay tanned field as rising smoke and promises finished in wisps, miles above. The wind below roused heavy air to breeze, stirring the heat from your occasional flame and the need to burn in you again. ~*~ yet... the green did not die, the life, still there; it hid from the black as if with no care; the clouds dispersed, yet the rains did fall... and I found that I loved you ... ... ... most of all. Yet you went back, again, and again, and cottonwood promises hid in the glen. ~*~ I say, do not, repeat, do not... inspire me like that again. ~*~ Nah... go ahead. I dare you. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
oh, how this poem speaks to me. bravo poet! ~tier, aka slacker  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
velcro.. I swear.... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The wind below roused heavy air to breeze, stirring the heat from your occasional flame and the need to burn in you again. oh yeah........sensual and downright beautiful Duncan! LOVE IT |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Very visual ~ and sensuously stirring!!! Love & Light, EA |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
as rising smoke and promises finished in wisps, miles above. The wind below roused heavy air to breeze, I love where this is going, it's like an endless feeling, even after the flame dies out. Nice one Dunc~ |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Like an inevitable prairie fire. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
beautiful you as always. What this poem longs for, I also long for. All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
pyro. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
this is an exceptionally metaphorically passionate poem. Well done!!!! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Whoa! Wow! Fanning here......great poem, Duncan! |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Your pen's on fire...that's for sure. More please! Sincerely, Reg |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
 just wanted to feel the flame again... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
good grief, this rocks! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
:thumbs up: Potent and passionate!  ....jo |
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