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Patricia
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0 posted 2004-07-06 01:47 PM


He Sails

He sails upon this boundless sea
To vision what his eyes can’t see,
Breathe salt of possibility.
No anchor cast, a spirit free.

He fear not loss he feared before
Of pain he knew, of pain he bore.
He knows now God waits at the shore
To touch his soul and change his core.

He leaves his wake, the trail behind
To gentle waves outside his mind.
All universe responds in kind
When love of self is what you find.

With seaside close, within his scope,
For anchor now he grasp and grope.
But when he saw God’s golden rope.
He ever held forever hope.


  


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1 posted 2004-07-06 02:18 PM


Such a beautiful comforting write Patricia.
Very much enjoyed...yes, very much indeed.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Magnus
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2 posted 2004-07-06 04:22 PM


Nicely done Patricia....Yes,  there is hope
when one holds that rope....I would think
there is one dangling for each and all of us.

Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-07-06 04:24 PM



Smiling with you, lady...
it's so good to see you posting again!

iliana
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4 posted 2004-07-06 04:24 PM


A beautiful write, Patricia!
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5 posted 2004-07-06 05:17 PM


nicely done
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