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catalinamoon
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0 posted 2004-07-06 12:17 PM


( Written for her birthday a few weeks from now, because I am so happy her health scare is over)

Sweet Savanna, fair of face
made of sugar, spice and lace
How I love your every way
you are sunshine in my day.
Just a little girl, it's true
Eight years old now comes to you.
Special one, may all years be
everything you hope to see.
Starkissed wishes birthday girl
you are Mimi's shining pearl.

© Copyright 2004 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-07-06 12:21 PM


this is precious

send my birthday wishes to her

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2 posted 2004-07-06 12:45 PM


8 special years...8 beautiful birthdays celebrated.....wishes for many many more...and all the happiness that follows

a sweet little poem for your birthday girl

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3 posted 2004-07-06 12:54 PM


enjoyed
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4 posted 2004-07-06 12:55 PM


Beautiful!

Eric

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5 posted 2004-07-06 01:30 PM


Oh, how beautiful. Give Savanna a birthday hug from me! Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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6 posted 2004-07-06 02:11 PM


And, birthday hugs from me as well Sandra...
So pleased sweet Savanna is going to be just fine!!
~Smiles & Hugs to you both, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

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7 posted 2004-07-06 03:03 PM


CatalinaMoon~
Such blessings He bestows~
So very thankful that you wrote this~
HAPPY NEWS to know Savanna is doing well~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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8 posted 2004-07-27 07:41 PM


enjoyed
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9 posted 2004-07-27 07:51 PM


I had written this back in June for Savannah's prayer circle, and am so pleased the scare is now over.


Sweet Savanna ~ fair of face
Gramma's darling~ dressed in lace.

Clings to Gramma ~ wrapped in love
Both say prayers ~ to God above.

Bring us please ~ some peace of mind
Bless this child ~ if you don't mind?

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10 posted 2004-07-27 10:38 PM


Very, very sweet, Catalinamoon.  I hopeo she has a wonderful birthday!   ....jo
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11 posted 2004-07-28 12:44 PM


Nice...James
Susan Caldwell
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12 posted 2004-07-28 07:28 AM


Happy Birthday Savanna!!!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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13 posted 2004-07-28 07:35 AM


What a precious piece of poetry!

It is wonderful that her health scare is over!

Wishing Savanna a birthday full of fun, laughter ~ and presents!

Sending her a birthday cake and good wishes (I hope the cake stays fresh until her birthday!)Birthday Cake
Birthday
Big birthday hugs to Savanna (and keep a hug for yourself!)
EA

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14 posted 2004-07-28 02:45 PM


How sweetly beautifull...wishing Savanna a Very Happy Birthday....

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15 posted 2004-07-28 02:51 PM


Sandra, so happy all is well.
give lots of hugs and kisses for us!

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16 posted 2004-07-28 02:52 PM


I'm going to ditto every comment above and add..what a beautiful song to sing out loud
Happy Birthday

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17 posted 2004-07-28 03:48 PM


beautiful and glorius as the health of any child should be
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18 posted 2004-07-28 03:56 PM


Wonderful and sweet!
Wish her and you a happy day and many more to come!

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19 posted 2004-07-28 03:58 PM


This poem is as sweet as her birthday cake-glad things are better now.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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20 posted 2004-07-28 04:37 PM


I missed this the first go around, Cat...glad to know that all is well and as it should be...


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21 posted 2004-07-28 05:30 PM


Sandra

eight is such a lovely age to grow to be...I'm so glad that all is well.  

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