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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-07-06 08:56 AM


you said bye
and grinned
at my understanding
when the two of you hugged
longer than I expected

you said there was a part of me
that really turned you on
and you wished you had more time
to get to know that part
I wished that too

you saw it in my eyes
and hugged me next
more slowly
as if to taste that part
on my scent

you kissed my cheek
and said for me to watch
when you were alone
with him
if I really wanted you

it was just a matter of time

___________ Dark

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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2004-07-06 09:13 AM


...just a matter of time...



you do draw revelations closely

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

2 posted 2004-07-06 06:47 PM


yup, just a matter of time

Mxx

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-07-06 07:03 PM


heh heh....just a matter of time...yes sir.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
4 posted 2004-07-07 10:35 AM


Your ink is showing, revealing, describing things that move...and as always I am drawn to glance. Even when words sort of fail me.
Hugs poetman.

Love,
Reg

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

5 posted 2004-07-07 10:51 AM


and time is on our side....
time with you is always a treasure dear friend.  slow hugs!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

6 posted 2004-07-07 11:00 AM


your descriptions turn the page for me, and I cannot wait to read you again and again...excellent verbage along with a flowing understanding...

your amazing you phantom of the opera you.
Smiles and hugs and good luck.  

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
7 posted 2004-07-07 06:10 PM


ms sun

Thanks lady rays...a pleasure to have your eyes here

______________

Ms DA, thanks for that nod, hugs to ya


_______________

Ms E...you and your hehe's...makes me wonder what you are thinking...wink

___________

Ms Reg, is that ink thang hangin out again?  dang it thought I had tucked it into the sleep slick sock..thanks for your eyes lady friend

_____________

Ms GS...always a time for you ms..thanks for your lady ways


______________

MS LeeJ you make me smile with a humble edge to my mouth..thanks for your read eyes


Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
8 posted 2004-07-07 08:31 PM


You are the genius of soft, sensual, and tempting. Lovely work. I will always be a fan.

Jenn

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill


BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
9 posted 2004-07-07 09:13 PM


This is ripe, and it becomes you DS~

Nicely~

Soleil Noir
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since 2001-12-19
Posts 688
USA
10 posted 2004-08-04 02:34 PM


and said for me to watch
when you were alone
with him
if I really wanted you

it was just a matter of time

~*~

Good things float back to the top,
naturally...

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