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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

0 posted 2004-07-06 03:39 AM



~*~*~

In dreamscapes
you become translucent
blurring my heart ache
like watercolors bleed into one another
transcend and transpire
with a touch of finesse
that is more beautiful than painful
beyond the horizon
where the sun sets and rises.

~*~*~

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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
1 posted 2004-07-06 04:14 AM


simply... beautiful poetry ~snow

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2004-07-06 04:44 AM


Thank you kindly for taking the time.
I appreciate it Snow~

Honeybunch
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3 posted 2004-07-06 06:44 AM


Well, there is of course only one word to describe this and that's "beautiful".
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-07-06 08:45 AM


Exquisite Bluesy lady...
Love this!!
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2004-07-06 09:10 AM


beyond the horizon is a most beautiful place to rest a while
aaahhhhhhhhhh
how lovely with a touch of blue......
miss u girlfriend

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2004-07-06 09:11 AM


My goodness, that was sooooo poetic ~ sooooo
vivid ~ sooooooo healing ~ sooooo beautiful!

Understanding hugs 'n smiles,
Linda

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just out of reach
7 posted 2004-07-06 09:51 AM


Sighing here....another keeper! hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

vandana
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8 posted 2004-07-06 11:04 AM


nice write
kayjay
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9 posted 2004-07-06 12:16 PM


blurring my heart ache
like watercolors bleed into one another

I hope the heartache eases when blurred, and stops the bleeding colors.  Nicely done.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

passing shadows
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displaced
10 posted 2004-07-06 12:24 PM


more beautiful than painful...
but still so painful yes
I know the feeling

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11 posted 2004-07-06 03:22 PM


Blues~
This is very pretty~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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12 posted 2004-07-06 05:43 PM


"like watercolors bleed into one another
transcend and transpire
with a touch of finesse"

Love these lines Bluesy...  

icebox
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13 posted 2004-07-06 05:50 PM


Today, I REALLY needed some sense of the beautiful part of life.

"like watercolors bleed into one another
transcend and transpire
with a touch of finesse"

TAG, you're it!  *smile*

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VAS
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15 posted 2004-07-06 07:05 PM


Lovely, Blues!

Watercolors are a wonderful medium.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
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16 posted 2004-07-06 07:50 PM


Beautiful Blue, the best I can do is spray.
Jeffrey Carter
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State of constant confusion!
17 posted 2004-07-06 08:15 PM


Poetic perfection!
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18 posted 2004-07-06 08:18 PM


I read this earlier and I just had to come back for antoher read.

so pretty, bluesy!

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19 posted 2004-07-06 09:46 PM


Well, I came for my first read....and this
is a beautiful piece of poetry..love the
blending..

Janet Marie
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20 posted 2004-07-08 07:23 AM


transcend and transpire
with a touch of finesse
==========================

a bittersweet beauty you have penned here Lori--visually lovely, with vocabulary and assonance that made reading aloud a poetic pleasure. Lovely lovely poetess girlie.

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21 posted 2004-07-08 08:29 AM


I've had such dreams....one in fact, that has repeated hundreds of times, over more decades than I care to count (four)....and always that transparency, that disappearing. But that's how dreams are, I guess.

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EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
22 posted 2004-07-13 03:18 AM


This is a keeper!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

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23 posted 2004-07-14 01:09 PM


Absolutely lovely, my friend. *S*
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
24 posted 2004-07-14 04:58 PM


I appreciate your nice replies,  it means a lot to me.

Thank you, one and all~

Kevo
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25 posted 2004-07-15 02:44 AM


So vivid and exquisitely beautiful.  Your imagery is simply remarkable.  When I see your posts I know I can count on wonderful pictures painted with words.  I enjoy your writing.  You are a gifted painter of words.

Kevin

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