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Snow
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0 posted 2004-07-06 01:55 AM





painting by: gerald o'connell

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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1 posted 2004-07-06 02:11 AM


you are too good!
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2 posted 2004-07-06 05:57 AM


OMG! Thump...thump...thump. Choke! Sorry just had to swallow my beating heart there. Woohoo Snow! Now that is what I call HOT! Love it! I think the master has just been outclassed...but what the heck...I'm not one to give up. I am just getting ready for work. 9 hour days this week! Groan. But it gives me the time I'll need to formulate a response to this. (Snicker!) You have just penned something that is truly remarkable Susan. Bravo! I don't normally do erotic...but give me a day and let us see what I come up with. Hee hee hee.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

iliana
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3 posted 2004-07-06 12:12 PM


Absolutely WOW, Snow!  Sounds like EV2 will have to put his next one somewhere behind closed doors though! lol!  
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4 posted 2004-07-06 02:46 PM


well, i think that kevin writes in much the same way i do ... layered enough that it can be taken in whatever direction your mind chooses... which is why it's such a pleasure to play with someone who can use words in this manner. i'm enjoying the journey. and according his mail... so is he :-D

thank you all for the encouraging words. kevin, writing for you is very much, my pleasure. however, i don't think you're outclassed.. lol. though it did wonderful things to my head to think so for a moment. lol! all in all... what matters is that you were pleased with the work.
~hugs~ S~

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5 posted 2004-07-06 05:59 PM


This just has to go back to the top before I begin my response to it! LOL! Just got home from work...give me 3 hours and then lets see what I have. (Wink!!!)

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Snow
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6 posted 2004-07-07 01:06 AM


...................tease.  *wink*
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7 posted 2004-07-12 08:05 PM


Hey Snow...I bet you think I had given up on this. Not so...just had a lot of trouble coming up with a response to it that I liked. I've been playing with various themes since you originally posted this...and finally I have settled on something. Hope it was worth the wait! LOL

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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8 posted 2004-07-20 08:31 PM


YOU!Are dangerous with words. I fell under the spell years ago.


M.

Snow
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9 posted 2004-07-20 08:41 PM


LOL.

well thanks for the smile.

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10 posted 2004-07-24 02:45 AM


Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions.  - ANON.



Snow
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11 posted 2004-07-24 03:59 AM


did i make you speechless ???? :-)

"Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless."
--Mother Teresa

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12 posted 2004-07-24 08:04 AM


What a great post! ~ scintillating and sensuous and beautifully presented! ~ and I enjoyed the feedback it received as well!

I broke out laughing at your response to  Grimm's reply ~ or rather the lack thereof!
Glitches happen!


EA

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13 posted 2004-07-27 05:58 PM


wow....
Snow
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14 posted 2004-07-27 06:01 PM


EA, I can't tell you how much I appreciate
your feedback. thank you !!
Chris.... what can i say... truly,
the responses from you have been
very heartfelt .. thank you!!


"Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless."
--Mother Teresa

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15 posted 2004-07-30 12:12 PM


A silky pleasure to read...I'll be back...James
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16 posted 2004-07-30 03:23 AM


"silky pleasure"
james that was such a wonderful thing to say. thank you very much!


snow

"Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless."
--Mother Teresa

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