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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
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My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-07-05 09:01 PM


As I sit here..
I push my fingers into my eyes,
Frustrated all around me come lies.
As I sit here..
Can't help but be me,
Overlook and you won't see.
As I sit here..
I slowly close my mind,
Waiting on someone to find.
As I sit here..
I see the clouds surround,
They gather all around.
As I sit here..
I see the world fall apart,
Instead of taking a bit of heart.
As I sit here..
I push my fingers into my eyes,
It slowly eases the pain of lies.

Victims....aren't we all.

© Copyright 2004 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-07-05 09:16 PM


Cool write Kyle...
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion
2 posted 2004-07-05 09:18 PM


thank ya Nancy
Copperbell
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3 posted 2004-07-05 09:21 PM


Can't help but be me,
Overlook and you won't see.

I like that - its so true

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
4 posted 2004-07-05 09:34 PM


So many times we long to be noticed but are missed.  Been there.  A wise man once said to open your heart in compassion to others and approach them in your openess and you will find connection.  I open my heart to you.  And here on this forum you are seen and heard.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2004-07-05 09:36 PM


Ultimately, the perpetrators of lies do receive their come-uppence...Either in this life ~ or the next. ~ a little birdie told me so!

Sorry to hear you are in such a sorry state! Don't push your fingers too far into your eyes! You could blind yourself to the beauty that is still around you.

You were very effective in expressing your angst and frustration.

Big, comforting HUG,
EA


Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
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since 2001-06-02
Posts 190

6 posted 2004-07-05 09:57 PM


Well snow if you've made through hell.
You will make it through this.
Good write

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
7 posted 2004-07-05 10:48 PM


Very powerful, well written words.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
8 posted 2004-07-06 02:20 AM


the ears do it for me
Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 2003-02-19
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
9 posted 2004-07-06 05:24 PM


i felt this very much........  
Paula Finn
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missouri
10 posted 2004-07-08 12:01 PM


I know kiddo...ya always got me ya know?
vandana
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11 posted 2004-07-08 12:56 PM


enjoyed
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