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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-07-05 03:15 PM

The color of delphiniums;

and the tease of horizons,
before the day is done,
when your sight is just about blocked
but yet can still surmise
what lay beyond the gate
to heaven's way,

the face of the pond
where the falling leaves
that brush the water
look inside themselves,
reflecting season's views,

the shade that makes the swirl
along the stationery billboard sky
way up high ............skies and eyes of you,
so blue, so very blue,

eyes that took me out to sea,
a capsized boat,
turned inside out and outside in,
without rescue,

your eyes of blue, eyes of blue
and no where out,
locked inside the depths of you
your eyes of blue.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-07-05 03:18 PM

Those must be some eyes. I know eyes like this, only they are brown mixed with liquid amber and one can drown in them.

Much enjoyed.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2004-07-05 03:21 PM

inkedgoddess - h'mmmmm, that blue hey?

always,

BC

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2004-07-05 03:24 PM

My goodness! These "Eyes of Blue" are amazing "2"!!!

EA

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-07-05 03:25 PM

Michele -- what eyes you describe! I have only know three people in my life whose eyes have inspired. One's eyes were blue (and nearly like you described only I saw a desert oasis dance in them); one who's eyes were almost black and I could see myself in them; and the third one, well, his eyes were green. Now, isn't that an odd thing -- one for each color! Enjoyed your poem so much!

...jo

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-07-05 03:26 PM

Oh my Michele...you keep writing about these blue eyes ...love to see them now!!

Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-07-06 02:28 AM

i'm amazed at you

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2004-07-06 02:47 AM

Smiling here and lovin this write, so I'm keeping it.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2004-07-06 03:56 AM

eyes that took me out to sea,
a capsized boat,
turned inside out and outside in,
without rescue,

Oh goodness sakes, that blue really does it for me!!
Nice writing girlielocks~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2004-07-06 03:34 PM

SweetInkyOne~

'the face of the pond
where the falling leaves
that brush the water
look inside themselves,
reflecting season's views'

There is such beauty in this lovely, lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

10 posted 2004-07-06 06:27 PM

thanks for singing the blues along with me

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