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Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-07-05 02:58 PM

Inspired by Iliana's Power of One . . .

One is a beginning . . .

Without one,
there could be no two.

One is but a drop of rain.

But on its journey
it inspires others
and is joined
until it becomes a shower . . .

and the shower
becomes a down pour-

swelling the stream
from trickle
to river . . .

which runs its course
overflowing
moving and pressing
overcoming obstacles
until its flow reaches
and joins with-

the sea . . .

which is grand in its vastness
and awesome in its might.

and to think . . .

it all began
with
one

s.a.t.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2004-07-05 03:02 PM

Exactly! ~ and you presented that concept so very, very well!

Linda

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-07-05 03:11 PM

Thank you Linda -- let's all be little drops of compassionate rain, then imagine the swell of love . . .

Hugs -- Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-07-05 03:16 PM

Susan, (very flattered, by the way) -- you took one and made a beautiful ocean! I just luv your soul!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-07-05 03:24 PM

jo, heart felt returns

-Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2004-07-05 06:59 PM

Susan~
This is a MARVELOUS penning~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
Member

since 2001-06-02

Posts 190

6 posted 2004-07-05 07:32 PM

That was lovely Susan,
Kinda felt it sprinkling as I read.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2004-07-05 07:36 PM

Ah Susan...this is extremely beautiful!
Perfect!
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2004-07-05 08:44 PM

Marge, Mr. Alleycat (cool name) and Nancy Lee -- thank you so much for your kind replies. Hugs to you all --

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

9 posted 2004-07-05 09:07 PM

lovely indeed

Victims....aren't we all.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

10 posted 2004-07-05 09:38 PM

Ah, thank you snowy one.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2004-07-06 02:22 AM

nice!

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

12 posted 2004-07-06 01:03 PM

"One"...everywhere we look.
Beautifuly inspired and inspiring.

Eric

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

13 posted 2004-07-06 03:13 PM

P.S. and Eric --

Thanks so much and hugs to you both --

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

14 posted 2004-08-11 08:56 PM

Susan, I do so enjoy it when poets
break words down, as you did...
down pour

it causes one to break apart their
mindthought...to make them
hear
the words with another ear...

yes...

and that you were touched
by another's poem...

well, that makes this even more special.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

15 posted 2004-08-11 09:01 PM

Thank you dear Sunshine - I do so appreciate your comments --

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

16 posted 2004-08-11 09:20 PM

Susan,
I like how you multiplied the oneness to become greater than itself! This is an excellent addition to my library, a great resource for that rainy day. Thanks so much for sharing your talents.
miscellanea

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