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A Night in Toscana with Andrea
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A Night in Toscana with Andrea |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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A Night in Toscana with Andrea Be still within it he feels with his voice of eyes where touching is sound He is crying now I hold his tears in my hand wipe them from my eyes The leather falling crashing sans wings in water the ocean a bluff Sleep is not easy when ever I go past light he follows me there ---- With gratitude to Andrea Bocelli for his voice that took me there |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Love this stanza: He is crying now I hold his tears in my hand wipe them from my eyes The rest are too deep for me. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Sweet Dreams! *smile* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Andrea Bocelli may not have the gift of sight, but he most assuredly has been blessed with a voice that reaches into the hearts of those fortunate enough to hear him sing...  He would be moved by your words.  EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Andrea Bocelli, what a gift he brings to us with his voice. Martie~You bring such a beautiful gift to us with your words. ~Hugs for the kweeper!~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"He is crying now I hold his tears in my hand wipe them from my eyes" Martie, I'm wondering if you know that this is actually what happens when one has a soul connection with another. It is exactly what happens. I've wiped many a tear from my eyes when knowing that they aren't mine - and it hurts so very badly. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Martie - nice, as always. Hope things are well with you... BC |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Beautiful write, Martie. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
He is indeed Magic Martie as is your poem and you beautiful lady  Maree. The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ Yes ... he takes me there too~ Love this dear one~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"The leather falling crashing sans wings in water the ocean a bluff Sleep is not easy when ever I go past light he follows me there" One voice inspires another. Liked this alot Martie...  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
short but full of emotion |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your vision is a view I aspire to. Love it, Martie girl~  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This one gave me chills, Martie... the good kind.  Well done, my friend... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
 A voice like this.....yes, exactly. As someone else said, sweet dreams. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I was hooked the first time I heard him... I didn't understand a word... and yet... I understood completely... for the beauty of his voice literally transcends language. *S* |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
as always dear friend... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Be still within it he feels with his voice of eyes where touching is sound Yes, my friend...big smiles and hugs...this entire poem is perceptive and accepting and written within a sort of trance of goodness...peace, tranquility and a night of seduction with a master of sound...taking you to the life's embrace...and knowing what it's all about. Martie, this is one of my favs of yours. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
this moved me Ms. Martie.... gawd your words move me... never stop writing... ever..... |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - you do this oh so very well - ah I so enjoy traveling with your poetry - Paul |
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