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Snow
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0 posted 2004-07-04 10:05 PM





photo by: Anje & Jan Ladage

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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1 posted 2004-07-04 10:18 PM


Lovely!  Just lovely!  

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2 posted 2004-07-04 10:27 PM


"to write my name on the curve where I fit ~
where you've folded me into you"

~ This is sooo fantastic! Simply purrr-fect!


EA

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3 posted 2004-07-05 02:39 AM


"satin saffron whispers"

That line -- this poem -- OMG! ! !  Soooooooo good!

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4 posted 2004-07-05 03:05 AM


thank you all sooo much!!

(that line, is pretty much
what the poem is written around)

:-)

again.. thank you!!

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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5 posted 2004-07-05 03:12 AM


oh...wow...

now that is awesome!

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6 posted 2004-07-05 03:29 AM


beautifull
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7 posted 2004-07-05 03:59 AM


Hi Snow! Pure genius. I love this...and it inspires me. I think I will go play with this for an hour and then post something new. Thank-you my friend.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Snow
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8 posted 2004-07-05 04:56 AM


to know you're inspired, kevin just made me smile so much!! i can't wait to look for your new post :-)


thank you to everyone who has commented, each one is truly appreciated!!

snow

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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9 posted 2004-07-05 06:07 AM


Hey Snow...finnished with the words I drew out of your piece. I really do love this poem. It just seeems so dreamy...alive. The title is just too cool. I believe it to be Spanish? I admit I am guessing on that...but since amour = love in French it seems safe to guess amore = love in Spanish. Spezia however I could not even guess at. Since the French word for, "of," is, "de," I can make an educated guess that the Spanish version of the word, "of," is, "di." "Something," of Love? Okay...now you have to confess what the translation truly is. Please! I am afterall not fluet in anything other then English after all. I am basing my guess on the translation solely from what I can recall from my grade 8 French class oh so many years ago. Thank-you Snow for the inspiration this poem gave me. It is very rare that I write a piece after having read someone else's stuff...but I must confess your writing is just some of the best work I have ever seen. Love you my friend.

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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
10 posted 2004-07-05 06:18 AM


ohh how your comments always bring my lips to a curl.... the title is in Italian... and it means..  spice of love. now i did see you posted so i'm off to read .. with much anticipation... :::smiles::: much love to you.

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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11 posted 2004-09-05 03:10 PM


Snow,
This does not belong in the cellar so it is getting bumped to the top. And what a fabulous write and gorgeous pic. I love everything about this and enjoy it even more now that I know the meaning of the of title. Excellent work.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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12 posted 2004-09-05 03:30 PM


This is exquisite.

Susan

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13 posted 2004-09-05 06:24 PM


larry.... thank you so very very much!!
it's always such a thrill for me when
a piece that is my favorite, is brought
back. i can not begin to express just
how happy i am you enjoyed this one.

... and susan, :-) thank you for your
kind thoughts.

i appreciate the feedback so much
thank you!!


snow

"Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless."
--Mother Teresa

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14 posted 2004-09-05 11:13 PM


snow sweet picture , even sweeter poem along it's side
~w

Snow
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15 posted 2004-09-05 11:24 PM


;-) thank you sweetie.
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16 posted 2004-09-05 11:35 PM


Just beautiful, the poem and the pic.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
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17 posted 2004-09-06 12:46 PM


you have a beautiful way
Snow
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18 posted 2004-09-06 01:00 AM



:-) thank you both so much !!
snow

"Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless."
--Mother Teresa

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