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Corinne
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state of confusion

0 posted 2004-07-04 04:46 PM


To Do

p/u dry cleaning
buy flowers
read Tolken

meditate
go for run
return books

love Eric completely
make love to Eric
make dentist appointment



© Copyright 2004 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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1 posted 2004-07-04 04:46 PM


I like this very much.  Great concept.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

miscellanea
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2 posted 2004-07-04 04:51 PM


Some things just happen whether they're on a list or not!  Very creative idea for a poem!
A pleasure to read.

          miscellanea

Enchantress
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3 posted 2004-07-04 04:55 PM


Much enjoyed peeking at your list Corinne.
Looks as though you left the two most enjoyable for when you have plenty of time.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Sunshine
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4 posted 2004-07-04 05:07 PM


Smiling....
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2004-07-04 05:09 PM


Corinne
I have a list just like that.

iliana
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6 posted 2004-07-04 05:45 PM


Clever!  Saying so much!  Happy 4th, Corinne! .......jo
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2004-07-04 07:33 PM



Cor, this slice of life is a piece of brill from your quill!

Meditating and loving does wonders for one's mind, body and spirit!




Linda

Bill Charles
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8 posted 2004-07-04 09:45 PM


Corinne - yes, a list of this...

BC

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9 posted 2004-07-04 09:53 PM


Corinne~

OH YES !!!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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10 posted 2004-07-05 03:13 AM


that's great!
Tequilia_Sunrise
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11 posted 2004-07-05 03:29 AM


good job alot of people put off makeing the dentist appointment.
Dark Angel
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12 posted 2004-07-05 06:04 PM


meditate and love more is absolutely what I should do.

Thank you Corinne

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

Corinne
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13 posted 2004-07-06 03:15 PM


Thanks everyone!


Corinne

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14 posted 2004-07-07 09:38 AM


interesting piece of work.. those crossed off as meaningful for their ease as are the ones not for their commitment.....

enjoyed as always Cor... hope the world is being kind to you and that you are indeed well...


Temptress
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15 posted 2004-07-07 08:27 PM


I don't think I've ever read poetry this way at all. Its funny, but I think of everything I write down as having the potential to be or inspire poetry, but I have never thought to use it in the way you have here. This is just awesome!

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill


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16 posted 2004-07-07 11:50 PM


Corinne

Very creative...!!  

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