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Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-07-04 10:35 AM


One more road to cross,
Can't dwell on one loss.
One more risk to take,
Live life like there's one more move to make.
One more road to cross.
Jump in on free will,
Heart stop pleasnantly still.
One more road to cross.
In our souls life chews a hole through,
And in the end there isn't much we can do.
One more road to cross.
Just one more road to cross,
On the other side grows the moss.
One more road to cross.
Fresh out of the asylum we came,
Searching for fortune and fame.
One more road to cross.
Look beyond all that,
Pick yourself up off the mat.
One more road to cross.
Find your inner being,
Then you will begin seeing.
One last road to cross...

Victims....aren't we all.

© Copyright 2004 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
Kahlil
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1 posted 2004-07-04 10:40 AM


...and so it goes...you've got it down...
I'd like to see this write set to a tune...
is it?

dig your picture...
~K~

Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion
2 posted 2004-07-04 10:41 AM


i dont know i dont think i set it to a tune..and thanks everyone wants me to get rid of my pic
Kahlil
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3 posted 2004-07-04 10:48 AM


keep the picture

write the tune....

~K~

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-07-04 10:52 AM


Yes Kyle...this hould be set to music...
Good write.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
5 posted 2004-07-04 11:33 AM


Yes, one more road to cross, but still the journey is worth taking.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

bslicker
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state of mind
6 posted 2004-07-04 11:44 AM


seems like there is always one more road to cross...

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

iliana
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7 posted 2004-07-04 12:06 PM


Yes, always another. And, I concur this might sit well in music. Enjoyed!  .....jo
passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2004-07-04 12:17 PM


good write

SimplyGold
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9 posted 2004-07-04 01:34 PM


Interesting write. Got me thinking, one more road to cross...

SG

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
10 posted 2004-07-04 01:39 PM


May all your future roads be easy, Dear Flakes From Hades.

Happy 4th hugs,
EA

miscellanea
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OH
11 posted 2004-07-04 05:28 PM


When I read it, I thought it should be set to music, too!
Tequilia_Sunrise
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
12 posted 2004-07-05 02:16 AM


enjoyed this
Paula Finn
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missouri
13 posted 2004-07-08 11:58 AM


good job youngun...
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