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Think Of Me
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Think Of Me |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Think Of Me Copyright 2004 by:Mark V Sheldon Think of me when the day’s burdens have left you in a moment’s peace and time holds you in reminisce though distant, vivid still tenderly touching another life shared before a turn of path traversed together in fleeting sojourn rendered me a memory You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Mark.. And you shall never be but just a distant memory... Your words will live on forever...this is wonderful.. So very much enjoyed m'friend. Happy Fourth Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MARK, You have made a strong imprint on me. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well done Mark, I believe you will be remembered, no doubt at all. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Mark, I think of you often, and doing so always puts a smile on my face.This is a graceful and gentle, if melencholic write. And it's always a sad moment when someone you care about moves out of your life, even when the memories are savored. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
yes, that precious Time when memory begets serenity... nicely penned, sir... ~K~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Enjoyed this. It is bittersweet to be a but a rememberance.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
enjoyed bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very much enjoyed the beautiful flow of this Mark, so much, it will be remembered and I will put it on a shelf in my libary to save it there.  ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
some things can never be forgotten |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Very tender, your ubiety is impressive and appreicated. SG |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I am sure she still does... So wistfully sweet and tender. Happy 4th hugs, EA |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write Mark! Eric |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
when the day’s burdens have left you in a moment’s peace and time holds you in reminisce Eloquently expressed, as was the rest. These lines especially captured me. Thanks for sharing. miscellanea |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mark~ Such an uplifting read~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Absolutely beautiful, Mark. Take care.........Sue I am in motion |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
MARK - I can say not more about your writings, as they are all suberb... BC |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mark Poignant and touching to hold a memory this way without bitterness. |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
GREAT WRITE! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A very kind thank you to each and every one of you who took the time to read this poem and to respond according to your thoughts. I am always grateful to you... -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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Margot Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154 |
Wonderful Margot Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh |
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