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Always Until
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Always Until |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Always Until I cannot still the movement till The march of spills fill moments’ mill And cannot quell the change of rhyme The bells of chime or the sands of time And though I stand and hold my breath I’m swept into the arms of death And though I’ve learned to fly the sky I do so on a fragile why I fly within gossamer dew The ever-changing old to new The restless rue of evermore The brew that closes every door So if I be a fire fly What meanings buzz the light I sigh? What message does the dancing send? Which fantasy will be my end? Each drop that rings annuity Expands beyond validity |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I cannot still the movement till The march of spills fill moments’ mill And cannot quell the change of rhyme The bells of chime or the sands of time ~*~ No, never should this moment be, when there is not your poetry; for each day's rhyme begins my time of placing here my own true line... See? You always DO inspire! Good morning, Starshine, er, Seymour!!   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Good mornig love, you are shining bright this morning.  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"And though I stand and hold my breath I’m swept into the arms of death And though I’ve learned to fly the sky I do so on a fragile why" Oh yes, don't we all. So very well said! Thank you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And though I’ve learned to fly the sky I do so on a fragile why ================================ your wisdom and humility always touch me  Ya painted wings on your rhymes with this treasure me sweet Sy-babers. Have a nice holiday with your firecracker Isabel.  Tell her I said hello. *S**ww*   |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good Morning Sy and Happy Fourth of July! Thanks for leaving the note in Forum 32.. I would never want to miss your wonderful morning writes. I see Karilea made the tea...yes please, I'd love a cup. Have a safe and happy holiday Sy! ~Morning hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
May the "until" be past the horizon, for the sunset is far, far away. A hearty day of "independence" to you, Sir. -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Good morning O rhyming one of the Floridas.. Happy to see you again this day.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Honeybunch Thank you dear and have a happy 4th. JM, I'll mention your regards to the firecracker. Have a happy 4th WWRS Nancy, Thank you and have a happy 4th MARK, Thank you my friend. Barry, Have a good 4th my friend. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ah, I just woke up and see those on the far side of the country have already been wide awake and productive  Well, good late morning to you sir and thanks for the lovely morning read. SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I have just figured out that there truly is balance in the universe. A microcosm of that balance is your rhyming and my senryus. I loved this read my friend! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan Good morning thank you and have a happy 4th. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper Thank you my friend and have a happy 4th. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
enjoyed such a good write on a holiday.. bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
bernie Thank you and have a happy 4th. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Each drop that rings annuity Expands beyond validity" Perhaps...the humor in the universe. Always expanding. What a great write, Seymour! Happy and safe 4th! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed Happy Fourth, Sy |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"So if I be a fire fly What meanings buzz the light I sigh? What message does the dancing send? Which fantasy will be my end?" We all ask to know the reasons, the way, the why just not as beautifully as you do, Sy. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Wish I could write like this: "And though I stand and hold my breath I’m swept into the arms of death And though I’ve learned to fly the sky I do so on a fragile why" Very fine indeed. SG |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
 I am beginning to understand...EA  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SimplyGold Thank you and have a happy. Martie You are a sweetheart. passing, Thank you dear. iliana You are kind. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Thank goodness I didn't miss this! Happppy 4th of July! miscellanea |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
loved And though I’ve learned to fly the sky I do so on a fragile why Corinne |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel, miscellanea Thank you so much. Corinne, thank you sweety. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ LOVE your gossamer dew~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Happy 4th of july. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - there you go again with another great write... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Why thank you Bill |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
enjoyed this very much |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hey Seymour! Love this piece my friend. It is always good to peek at your work! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tequilia, And I enjoy tequilia. LOL thank you Evocative, Glad you took a peek, thank you. |
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milkweed Junior Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 42fields of gold |
I liked this very much. It makes me ask questions of myself. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
milkweed, That's good and thank you. |
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