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bluebrdy65
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0 posted 06-10-2000 07:45 AM       View Profile for bluebrdy65   Email bluebrdy65   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for bluebrdy65


This game you play
can only bring dismay
and break the branches
of friendship we have grown.
The twists and the turns
in our tree of friendship
will be cut away
leaving only an empty trunk
to rot in the ground.
© Copyright 2000 Janie M. Williams - All Rights Reserved
SpitFire
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1 posted 06-11-2000 10:18 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Oh how terribly sad this is.  To see or hear of a friendship ending.  You have written well, the metaphor fits perfectly.  It's sad yet there is beauty in your words.
Thank you for sharing this little piece of you. Take care. *Peace.


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kynder
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2 posted 06-12-2000 06:37 PM       View Profile for kynder   Email kynder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kynder

what is it about a dead tree that just rips your soul out?? what an awesome piece here.  i hope you will have a new seed in your heart one day, and it will grow forever to stay.

kynder


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