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bluebrdy65
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Gladys,


0 posted 06-10-2000 07:41 AM       View Profile for bluebrdy65   Email bluebrdy65   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for bluebrdy65


My heart

It took me years
to figure it out.
I opened my heart
and my soul I took out.
I gave it to you so completely
Years have passed and our life
has had strifes.
But my soul in your hands
has only felt delight
Now I'm scared you will go away
I don't know what to do to make you stay.
My soul without you would be crushed
and all I could do would be to lock it
back up.
© Copyright 2000 Janie M. Williams - All Rights Reserved
kynder
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since 04-11-2000
Posts 535
Tallahassee, Florida


1 posted 06-13-2000 04:21 AM       View Profile for kynder   Email kynder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kynder

oh wow, blue... this one is so heart felt, truly.  i feel like sometimes the ones i want to be most read are the ones that no one reads at all... do you feel like that sometimes??

kynder

  The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson
Joel the wolf
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Angels Camp


2 posted 06-14-2000 02:48 AM       View Profile for Joel the wolf   Email Joel the wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Joel the wolf's Home Page   View IP for Joel the wolf

Hey Blue, yes these are true feelings, I have thought along the same lines myself.
thinking That if my W. D. leaves me I'll do the same.
My heart to your's.
love the poem kid.

Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.
 
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