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bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,

0 posted 2000-06-10 07:41 AM



My heart

It took me years
to figure it out.
I opened my heart
and my soul I took out.
I gave it to you so completely
Years have passed and our life
has had strifes.
But my soul in your hands
has only felt delight
Now I'm scared you will go away
I don't know what to do to make you stay.
My soul without you would be crushed
and all I could do would be to lock it
back up.

© Copyright 2000 Janie M. Williams - All Rights Reserved
kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
1 posted 2000-06-13 04:21 AM


oh wow, blue... this one is so heart felt, truly.  i feel like sometimes the ones i want to be most read are the ones that no one reads at all... do you feel like that sometimes??

kynder

  The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson

Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-06-14 02:48 AM


Hey Blue, yes these are true feelings, I have thought along the same lines myself.
thinking That if my W. D. leaves me I'll do the same.
My heart to your's.
love the poem kid.

Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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