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monet9
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since 2000-06-09
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0 posted 2000-06-09 09:55 PM


earth's fury

her cry went unanswered
as they burnt and raped her.
her body erupted from within,
sending fires of rage throughout the land,
spitting out vapor of pain across the skies.

the colors of her spirit became subdued
as they blended into darkness.
her blood ran cold and exploded
propelling shock waves within her soul,
plunging forth a tumultuous liquid.

and as she twirled faster and faster,
her creator watched with tearful eyes.
indeed, the human factor destroyed it all.

so, with a wave of his hand.
she vanished,giving rise to the new millenium.


teresa donoher


 

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X Angel
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon
1 posted 2000-06-09 11:13 PM


ahhh we are not good stewards of our beautiful earth are we? Excellent concept!
~Heather

Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-06-10 09:45 AM


A great take on this subject! Welcome to the Passions family. Please check your email for a special welcome!  
nando
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since 2000-06-09
Posts 87
Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden
3 posted 2000-06-10 10:07 AM


Teresa...

Deep, thoughtfull, intelligent...

Loved reading this, really sets things in perspective...

-nando-

 Ask me how to live your life, and this to you I´ll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, you´ll smile at yesterday...

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-06-10 07:11 PM


Welcome Teresa!!!  What a wonderful first post!!!  She will suffer more before she is truly appreciated....

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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