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lotharingia
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saarbruecken, Germany


0 posted 06-09-2000 09:07 AM       View Profile for lotharingia   Email lotharingia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit lotharingia's Home Page   View IP for lotharingia

                                                 Your heart a landmine
                                                  Your soul worn

                                                  Your past a crime
                                                  Your future torn


 Uta Lotharingia
"Wir wollen nicht Wert und Sinn ... wir wollen Unwert und Unsinn"
Raoul Hausmann
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taramw
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1 posted 06-09-2000 09:12 AM       View Profile for taramw   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for taramw

You encapsulate so much here!!!  With so few words you provoked so many feelings!  I love your style  
Jeremiah Johnson
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Brooksville, Fl, U.S


2 posted 06-09-2000 01:35 PM       View Profile for Jeremiah Johnson   Email Jeremiah Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeremiah Johnson

i also like your style of short expression. and this is a very good poem i like it alot.
it kind of states that even if you doing something wrong and do time for it in any sense some people still hold you to your crime and can't see people do make mistakes.
lotharingia
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3 posted 06-10-2000 03:36 PM       View Profile for lotharingia   Email lotharingia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit lotharingia's Home Page   View IP for lotharingia

Thanks Tara!
Jeremiah,
This was actually meant to be about a neglected, unloved and defenceless kid that gets pushed around by adults until it's an emotial wreck.
But it's my opinion that a poem means what the individual reader understands/sees, not what the author really meant. Thanks for your comments, it's always good to hear what others see in your work!


 Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

Hardrock
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4 posted 07-29-2000 05:39 PM       View Profile for Hardrock   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Hardrock

Only 4 lines...and yet you captured a lifetime.  How brilliant!!  Hardrock
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