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Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
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Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2000-06-08 10:45 PM



           As most people grow closer,
           I grow more distant i fear.
And that fear i live within like a prism so clear.
      Only noticed by some the ones like me.
    That can see we each have our own journeys.
       Our own paths to walk along so glad.
   And i feel sorrow for the ones who can't see.
        The world and it's so many views,
                An understand me.

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X Angel
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon
1 posted 2000-06-09 11:23 PM


J...
Letting someone get close to you is the first step towards being REAL!  
Nice points, I too feel this way at times. Dark, cold, lonely. Like only a few could ever understand!
Keep em coming!
~Heather

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