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Lost Forever

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Acies
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0 posted 06-08-2000 10:20 AM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Acies


Now I know that you don't feel the same way
Loosing you makes me feel I had died that same day
I honestly don't know how I'm suppose to just move on
Cause my heart and soul, I know is not that strong

All the while I thought you'd always be by my side
You decided to leave, this left me totally empty inside
I've said that I'm here in this world just to be with you
You left and took the only reason for me to continue

How could someone like you just so easily break my heart
You took my love for you and just as easily tore it apart
Please tell me the reason why everything had to end like this
I need you with me, I'm about ready to accept Death's kiss

Though it hurts me so much, I guess you never really did care
Cause now that I need you the most, you don't want to be there
Swore on my grave, no matter what, I'll always be here for you
For you are the love of my life and this is the least for you I could do

Been thinking of different ways to always be together, forever with you
Only one thing stands out, but I can't, for this is wrong for me to do
I will always love you, a promise to you I'll always make
I'll evetually be with you forever when my life HE finally takes
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sweetthing61401
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1 posted 06-08-2000 01:06 PM       View Profile for sweetthing61401   Email sweetthing61401   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sweetthing61401

this poem is really great. At the beginning I thought that the man had left the girl and broke her heart. Then at the end you realize he had died and left her alone in the world. It is great that the girl chose to live because even though the one she loves is gone there is still much to do in this world. He would want that person to live and be happy and meet him when it is her time.  
Jeremiah Johnson
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2 posted 06-08-2000 03:40 PM       View Profile for Jeremiah Johnson   Email Jeremiah Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeremiah Johnson

this is a great poem. it goes through someone's life after a lost of a loved one.
it sets itself up nice. could be unclear to some but is meaningful in your own heart.
Poet deVine
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3 posted 06-08-2000 07:18 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I like the way you thought this one through..and taking your own life is not the answer! Good job.  
Isis
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4 posted 06-08-2000 09:19 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Some believe if you commit the big S you don't go to heaven, others are sure you do..
Is it worth the risk?  We are young and can live on, it is the older or elderly that feel a passing much more so than we do.......
I too have lost people young and old, but you grieve, scream, cry, rage at the fates and then you rebuild your life.
There are many special gifts awaiting us all, kids, grandkids, wonderful relationships, if we end it we never even have a chance at life's happiness..
I know how it FEELS but with hope and love, and new things to try you do get on with it...
If you wanna talk anytime please email me..

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


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5 posted 06-08-2000 11:43 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

i'd love to talk about it Isis
thanks for offering
you'll hear from me soon
Martini
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6 posted 08-10-2000 02:41 PM       View Profile for Martini   Email Martini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Martini

been there
actually I'm still there
should you want to compare stories
send an email my way
I'm always here to listen
 
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