navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #1 » What Happened?
Dark Poetry #1
Post A Reply Post New Topic What Happened? Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Bunny
Junior Member
since 2000-05-13
Posts 30


0 posted 2000-06-08 07:52 AM


To those who were not there
To those who did not care
Why did you have to pick me
To not set free
Why can't I climb out of this hole
That binds my heart
And cages my soul
I'm alone here in this place
With only the blurry memories of what I used to be
My glass world has been shattered
It now lays before me,
In sharp, cutting pieces
My tears turn to ices as they fall silently and
   unseen to the floor
I used to be so happy
But I suppose that was not meant to be
And I don't know what happened to me...

© Copyright 2000 Bunny - All Rights Reserved
taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

1 posted 2000-06-08 08:10 AM


Hello Bunny... a very touching poem.  It makes me wonder what has happened to the person in the poem... what is happening in their life.  It invokes a feeling of wanting to know more!!  
Acies
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
2 posted 2000-06-08 11:43 AM


GREAT POEM
One thing I've realized in life though is that no matter how we feel that people don't care, they actually do.

You have to realize that sometimes thy are the ones that makes you mad for they really care and tell you the opposite of what you want to hear.

I believe that poeple are blind or choose to be blind with the situations they are in to.

[This message has been edited by acire (edited 06-08-2000).]

Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-06-08 07:15 PM


Sometimes we close ourselves off from everyone when we're hurt and it's hard for anyone else to get in..to care. I look forward to reading more from you..you have a good perspective on this.  
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #1 » What Happened?

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary