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Acies
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Twilight Zone

0 posted 2000-06-07 01:52 PM



As I think of you and close my eyes
Someone please hold me tight
Tell me that I'm just dreaming
Because it hurts me deep inside

I'd like you to feel how I miss you so much
How I miss your warm, caring, and gentle touch
Your cute little face in my mind
Your soft and innocent lips touching mine

I miss running my fingers thru your hair
The feeling in my heart knowing you did care
I miss the limited times we spent with each other
How I wanted it to last and be with you forever

That sharp but mysterious look in your eyes
You look so cute when you bite your lower lip as you smile
That devlish grin that shows as you stare right at me
I miss you so much, alone in the dark, feeling so lonely

You're the only one I've always wanted
A fool, I am, I took you for granted
Now here I am, holding on to the memories
Left only with hope slowly drowning in my own tears

Now I realize how much you really mean to me
I miss you so much, that I want you to see
Why only now, I don't know, I must have been blind
My broken heart is in your hands, please be kind

All I can say is, "I'm sorry, please forgive me"
It may not be enough, but I don't know what else to do
I"m not asking you for one last chance
Baby, all I want you to know is that "I Love You"

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amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
1 posted 2000-06-07 02:19 PM


Hi Acire
Thats all I want. Thats all I feel. Thats all I dream. Just to be with her. THanks for the read.

Sincerely
A_L

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-06-07 11:01 PM


Welcome Acire!!  I know how this feels!!  You just want this one last chance to say how you feel... beautiful work  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Jeffyf
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 49
Muncie, IN
3 posted 2000-06-08 05:02 AM


I really enjoyed this poem.  These feelings seem to jump straight out of the screen and grab me by the throat.  The pain and sorrow of missing or losing someone you love is prominant in many of our lives.  There are people here that will help us, so we have nothing to worry about, nothing to hide.  I would enjoy seeing more of your work here at dark passions.
Jeffrey

kynder
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since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
4 posted 2000-06-08 06:58 PM


ya know, you men never cease to amaze me.  i thought only women felt these things.  i can see that you are truly blessed with a giving heart.  i hope you don't have to endure much more pain, my fellow poet.  very good work!!  
kynder

  The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson

Acies
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5 posted 2000-06-08 11:27 PM


thanks kynder
you are so kind
thanks to the others too  

[This message has been edited by acire (edited 06-08-2000).]

Allan Riverwood
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6 posted 2001-05-06 02:08 PM


Hey, I really enjoyed this poem a great deal.  What you describe is truly heartbreaking... a love that you hold still, but lost for yourself by some mistake.  Well done.
Welcome to Passions in Poetry.  Hope to see you around here more often!  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

cherish
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since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
7 posted 2001-10-24 12:48 PM


your first post!:phboy:..markedly different to your others...but ii found your first post!


         

"......",said the wise mute.

penpen
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since 2003-08-14
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brazille
8 posted 2003-08-14 09:08 PM


o yeah. i've been there......Still there. Really good poem. I really enjoy reading it. Keep on writing!

every step i take
is another misstake to you

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