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Acies
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0 posted 06-07-2000 01:52 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Acies


As I think of you and close my eyes
Someone please hold me tight
Tell me that I'm just dreaming
Because it hurts me deep inside

I'd like you to feel how I miss you so much
How I miss your warm, caring, and gentle touch
Your cute little face in my mind
Your soft and innocent lips touching mine

I miss running my fingers thru your hair
The feeling in my heart knowing you did care
I miss the limited times we spent with each other
How I wanted it to last and be with you forever

That sharp but mysterious look in your eyes
You look so cute when you bite your lower lip as you smile
That devlish grin that shows as you stare right at me
I miss you so much, alone in the dark, feeling so lonely

You're the only one I've always wanted
A fool, I am, I took you for granted
Now here I am, holding on to the memories
Left only with hope slowly drowning in my own tears

Now I realize how much you really mean to me
I miss you so much, that I want you to see
Why only now, I don't know, I must have been blind
My broken heart is in your hands, please be kind

All I can say is, "I'm sorry, please forgive me"
It may not be enough, but I don't know what else to do
I"m not asking you for one last chance
Baby, all I want you to know is that "I Love You"
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amazon_lover
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1 posted 06-07-2000 02:19 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi Acire
Thats all I want. Thats all I feel. Thats all I dream. Just to be with her. THanks for the read.

Sincerely
A_L
Isis
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2 posted 06-07-2000 11:01 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Welcome Acire!!  I know how this feels!!  You just want this one last chance to say how you feel... beautiful work  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Jeffyf
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Muncie, IN


3 posted 06-08-2000 05:02 AM       View Profile for Jeffyf   Email Jeffyf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffyf

I really enjoyed this poem.  These feelings seem to jump straight out of the screen and grab me by the throat.  The pain and sorrow of missing or losing someone you love is prominant in many of our lives.  There are people here that will help us, so we have nothing to worry about, nothing to hide.  I would enjoy seeing more of your work here at dark passions.
Jeffrey
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4 posted 06-08-2000 06:58 PM       View Profile for kynder   Email kynder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kynder

ya know, you men never cease to amaze me.  i thought only women felt these things.  i can see that you are truly blessed with a giving heart.  i hope you don't have to endure much more pain, my fellow poet.  very good work!!  
kynder

  The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson
Acies
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5 posted 06-08-2000 11:27 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

thanks kynder
you are so kind
thanks to the others too  

[This message has been edited by acire (edited 06-08-2000).]
Allan Riverwood
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6 posted 05-06-2001 02:08 PM       View Profile for Allan Riverwood   Email Allan Riverwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allan Riverwood

Hey, I really enjoyed this poem a great deal.  What you describe is truly heartbreaking... a love that you hold still, but lost for yourself by some mistake.  Well done.
Welcome to Passions in Poetry.  Hope to see you around here more often!  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

cherish
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swimming in fairy floss.......


7 posted 10-24-2001 12:48 AM       View Profile for cherish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherish

your first post!:phboy:..markedly different to your others...but ii found your first post!


         

"......",said the wise mute.

penpen
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8 posted 08-14-2003 09:08 PM       View Profile for penpen   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for penpen

o yeah. i've been there......Still there. Really good poem. I really enjoy reading it. Keep on writing!

every step i take
is another misstake to you

 
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