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LeeAnne Dk Junior Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 32 |
You think you know love I assure you not Love, what does it mean When do you know that love is what you've got I have suffered at its hands My heart being twisted by it My eyes bled the tears of hurt Countless hours of emptiness in me would sit Did love spare me the tormentment No, it fed and inspired my pain So much piercing in my heart What did I have to gain Pure space and endless torture Was both my foe and friend I have learnt something from this That the torture of Love will never end [This message has been edited by LeeAnne Dk (edited 06-10-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~First,...WELCOME!!! Next,...this is a great window into where your heart is right now (or whoever this is about). Write this pain right out of you...it helps for me atleast a bit. Take care...great poem. *Peace. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I do feel the same way "everyday i hide and dry my tears, but the hurt just won't go away I guess the wounds and scars of falling in love is here to stay" |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Firstly welcome to the dark forum  The pain never leaves but it lessens, and then lessens more till it is just an uncomfortable memory... It'll happen it may take time but it will, in the meantime -vent here in dark, it really helps  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Jeffyf Junior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 49Muncie, IN |
Love provides such pain. Without loss, though, where would be the gain? Awesome poem. Keep them coming! Jeffrey |
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LeeAnne Dk Junior Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 32 |
Thank you all for your replys....do expect more of my work and keep the comments flowing... |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
oh wow i really love this!! pure space and endless torture!! i love it!! i like to switch words to convey messages alot. keep em coming! kynder The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
i know it too well otherwise wouldn't be spending long lonely hours at passionate forums. It's a torture its pain and whatever madness it is. Sincerely A_L |
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LeeAnne Dk Junior Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 32 |
Thank you Kynder and A_L... I know what you mean... |
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nando Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 87Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden |
LeeAnne Welcome I´m new here too so I think its nice to meet other rookies here and read their poems. Like the way you make me think with your poem, wandering whether it´s worth it. But it is my friend, it´s worth every bit of pain on the way... Keep up the good work... -nando- Ask me how to live your life, and this to you I´ll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, you´ll smile at yesterday... |
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tac Junior Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 28New Jersey |
I hear you... Why must love be pleasure intermingled with such pain? The pain must be there somewhere, lurking, otherwise the love means nothing. There never can be true trust, the more you open up the deeper cuts and more pain. ...and just when you think that you come out of the darkness, it drags you back in again |
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