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Walter Poe
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0 posted 06-07-2000 06:32 AM       View Profile for Walter Poe   Email Walter Poe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Walter Poe


Will you come with me
Take my hand
I will take you with me
Close your eyes
I will show you the way
I will take you to the dark
Into me into my words
I will be your guide
Allow the words
That are my song
to envelop you
to wrap you in its images
Heat fire Cold darkness
The space in you
deep down
where you can't see
i will illuminate
The Dark is calling
Take my Hand


 "Mother is the word for god on the hearts and lips of children everywhere" Brandon Lee THE CROW
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Janet Marie
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1 posted 06-07-2000 08:25 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Into me into my words
I will be your guide
Allow the words
That are my song
to envelop you
to wrap you in its images
Heat fire Cold darkness
The space in you
deep down
where you can't see
i will illuminate
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Walter,
this is exquisite...truly
I love when you write like this...
beautiful, gentle words of longing...
adorned with the darkness and light of your poets heart.
this goes on my fav list too  

you know me walter...
i've never been afraid of the dark...*smile*
later poet-gator
jm


 I think I could need - this in my life
I think I'm just scared - that I know too much
I can't relate and that's a problem
I'm feeling ...
If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home
There's an awful lot of breathing room
But I can hardly move
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
cuz there's a little bit of something me...
In everything in you.
~MB20~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

SpitFire
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2 posted 06-07-2000 03:35 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Ooohh,...this is good.  Frighteningly real. (Not sure if that's a word, I seem to be making my own these days). Anyway,...great read here. Truly. Take care. *Peace.
EagleOne
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since 03-07-2000
Posts 2858
Between a laugh and a tear...


3 posted 06-07-2000 04:57 PM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Anonther fine piece of work Walter!

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown


Butterflies_dont_cry
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4 posted 06-07-2000 11:23 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

I had to read this several times to regain my typing skills....you shook me with this one, It is amazing, the words...the images...An amazing look into the "dark"....but allow me a moment to say...if you listen, perhaps there is someone calling to you in the light.  Take care W.P. this was a magnificent piece.
Janet Marie
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5 posted 06-08-2000 02:34 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

can you hear a voice calling
whispered promises from the night
an invitation to dance ...
to dance with the shadows --
between the dark and light
night breezes carry a song
stars light up the midnight sky
a blue celestial moon glows
anticipation is on high
no need for hesitation
on this journey to embark
for just a moment ...
a moment to go dancing in the dark

jm

I owed you one *smile*
later-darkness-gator

Janet Marie
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6 posted 06-26-2001 07:32 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

*library*
Janet Marie
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try again...
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