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Forgetting |
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Ember Junior Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 10 |
The emotions you gave me raped and taken by time It feels so bad, it steals another minute to gain revenge Forgeting how soft your touch really was feels like a crime The memory of the way you laughed is fading, its the ultimate sin The last second slips away like the last grain in a sped up hour glass Tattered pieces of a torn memory plague my soul with glimpses of your face The wind whispers your name as another tear hits the ground, I feel the past But nothing is brought to my eyes, I am not forgeting you, I am lost in denile I feel guilty to even appear sane |
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bluebird New Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 1 |
This is a really strong poem, great imagery and I loved the ending. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Another wonderful poem full of raw emotion Paul. I love it...keep'em coming dorkus. LoVe yA LotS, Jaime< !signature--> Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 06-07-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~*Sigh*,...wow, this is such a great expression from you. So well written and just a superb piece of poetry for sure. I enjoyed reading this..although it's saddening it is touching as well. Take care. *Peace. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Wow! This poem is very powerful indeed! Evokes many emotions... which is great! Just what a poem should do  |
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