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To Be With You

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AnGeLiX17
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since 06-05-2000
Posts 46
Salisbury, NC


0 posted 06-06-2000 09:29 PM       View Profile for AnGeLiX17   Email AnGeLiX17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AnGeLiX17

Do you love me,
or do you not,
I told you once,
but you forgot.

If I should die,
before I wake,
I will wait for you,
at the gate.

If you aren't there,
by Judgement Day,
I'll know you've gone,
the other way.

I will give,
the angels back their wings,
golden harps,
and other things.

And just to prove,
that my love is true,
I'd go to Hell,
to be with you.

© Copyright 2000 Kristi - All Rights Reserved
MagnoliaBlue
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since 05-12-2000
Posts 387


1 posted 06-07-2000 12:36 AM       View Profile for MagnoliaBlue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MagnoliaBlue

Wow...I can remember reading this in the 50's.
A blast from the past!

MagnoliaBlue
AnGeLiX17
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since 06-05-2000
Posts 46
Salisbury, NC


2 posted 06-07-2000 01:50 AM       View Profile for AnGeLiX17   Email AnGeLiX17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AnGeLiX17

In the 50's? haha... cool. It's about an ex boyfriend... I really cared about him. By the way... thanks for all the replies to my poems guys.
lotharingia
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since 06-04-2000
Posts 895
saarbruecken, Germany


3 posted 06-07-2000 03:24 AM       View Profile for lotharingia   Email lotharingia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit lotharingia's Home Page   View IP for lotharingia

This one is really sweet, I find. I hope he deserved such a lovely poem!

 Uta Lotharingia
"Wir wollen nicht Wert und Sinn ... wir wollen Unwert und Unsinn"
Raoul Hausmann
Joel the wolf
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since 04-06-2000
Posts 1341
Angels Camp


4 posted 06-12-2000 02:53 AM       View Profile for Joel the wolf   Email Joel the wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Joel the wolf's Home Page   View IP for Joel the wolf

I have said much the same for my love to kid. I do hope he is worth it.
I said I'd hold open the gates for her to pass.

love it kid.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.
Acies
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Twilight Zone


5 posted 06-12-2000 09:56 AM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

lovely poem, i love it
right now i feel the same way for my ex
 
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