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AnGeLiX17
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since 06-05-2000
Posts 46
Salisbury, NC


0 posted 06-06-2000 06:51 PM       View Profile for AnGeLiX17   Email AnGeLiX17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AnGeLiX17

She'll never get it through her head,
he beats her more she'll wind up dead.

Lookin for excuses for him everyday...
only things she's doin' is wasting away.

Screams coming from their house every night,
here come the cops for another fight.

Next day see him apologize...
and everything's alright.

See him knockin' at her bedroom door,
"Love ya baby can I have some more?"

Let him in hes ready to score,
beat her around and make her love you,
abuse her and feed her addiction.
© Copyright 2000 Kristi - All Rights Reserved
amazon_lover
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since 04-09-2000
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland


1 posted 06-06-2000 07:05 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi AngeliX
Thats bad and sick of a person. When you're in love you shouldn't hurt he object of your love and affection. If you beat a person you're not only physically mutilating her but also destroys the trust she had placed all along. He's foolish rampant person and never trust him.

Sincerely
A_L
MagnoliaBlue
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since 05-12-2000
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2 posted 06-07-2000 12:23 AM       View Profile for MagnoliaBlue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MagnoliaBlue

I am glad you didn't say that you love him...if you did, I missed it while I was trying to keep from saying some very bad things.

One message*** Love does not hurt!
Get out while you still can***

Hugs, MagnoliaBlue
lotharingia
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since 06-04-2000
Posts 895
saarbruecken, Germany


3 posted 06-07-2000 03:38 AM       View Profile for lotharingia   Email lotharingia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit lotharingia's Home Page   View IP for lotharingia

I love poems about things like this. The really incomprehensible things in life that just happen again and again. There's so much violence out there, so much abuse of the helpless, and of those too weak to help themselves, for whatever reason, be it love or fear, culture, or lack of self confidence. I really like the snappy flow in your poem and the way you avoid tear-jerking phrase. The simple facts say it all.

 Uta Lotharingia
"Wir wollen nicht Wert und Sinn ... wir wollen Unwert und Unsinn"
Raoul Hausmann
Joel the wolf
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since 04-06-2000
Posts 1341
Angels Camp


4 posted 06-12-2000 02:58 AM       View Profile for Joel the wolf   Email Joel the wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Joel the wolf's Home Page   View IP for Joel the wolf

how can this happen?? lock the door.
anyway I like the way you express yourfelf in this, I hope it's not you.
keep writing kid.

love your style.

Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.
 
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