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kynder
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since 04-11-2000
Posts 535
Tallahassee, Florida


0 posted 06-06-2000 01:55 PM       View Profile for kynder   Email kynder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for kynder

OK This is it
I give up
I can take no more
I'm a sitting duck
I have sewn my quilts
And sold my dope
My skin has burned
At the altar
The searing sun
The burning moon
I see stars as diamonds
And trees have spoken to me
Bruises have faded
And I swam in the sea
But pain still will not leave me be
Wolves hear my cry
Roses in Ireland
Isis divine
Nameless one hides and i don't know why
All gardens my kynder longs to see
I ask for a diagnosis
Screaming for love
But loneliness is what abounds in me
There is no end to this poem I
Am attempting to create
I am turning
Spinning tumbling
Ever so rapidly
Trying to find shapes
Amongst the blur
Can't focus
Eyes won't fixate
Tears just roll
Heart stays in the state of break
Am I rambling?
Of course I am
No logic could possibly reside
In this chaotic shell I call my heart soul and mind


*****kynder


The years teach much which the days never know.  Ralph Waldo Emerson

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SwŚmp§Faerˇie
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since 03-29-2000
Posts 357
Illinois


1 posted 06-06-2000 10:10 PM       View Profile for SwŚmp§Faerˇie   Email SwŚmp§Faerˇie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SwŚmp§Faerˇie

This reminds me of the dismal journey Alice had down the rabbit hole,esp. the latter part. Very interesting. I've written a few ramblers,but they just had nothing worthwhile in them,But it's strange,your's DOES seem to have something to it. i can't put my finger on itbut i enjoyed reading it.


swamp


 And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson
bluebrdy65
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since 05-16-2000
Posts 275
Gladys,


2 posted 06-06-2000 10:48 PM       View Profile for bluebrdy65   Email bluebrdy65   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bluebrdy65

I totally relate to this poem.Its great
even with alittle rambling  just hang in there.
kynder
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since 04-11-2000
Posts 535
Tallahassee, Florida


3 posted 06-06-2000 11:08 PM       View Profile for kynder   Email kynder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kynder

if any of you have been following my writings here, i used many of the titles of my other postings in this poem.  i guess i am feeling for all my effort, there is no relief.  efforts are in vain to erase this pain.  i greatly appreciate you even taking the time to read my ramblings.  thank you thank you thank you.

  The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson
Jeremiah Johnson
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since 06-08-2000
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S


4 posted 06-18-2000 03:12 PM       View Profile for Jeremiah Johnson   Email Jeremiah Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeremiah Johnson

i see some of your best work here to set the facts of ones life from his own heart into poems makes the best poems i think keep up the good work.

I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul


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